The scarlet sunset

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The scenery at sunset

The blushing sphere into the sea was diving.

The world, of her beauty depriving.

The golden strings were fading.

As scarlet was pervading.

Orange was dying.

The velvety horizon.

The sun and ocean were combining,

As if never will come separation.


Submitted: January 02, 2011

© Copyright 2020 Manaf Alabd Alrahim . All rights reserved.

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James D. Storrington

Beautiful in its simplicity... Very nicely written! :)

Sun, January 2nd, 2011 10:13am

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Means a lot that u like em :)

Sun, January 2nd, 2011 2:22am

tattooedmoon

Hi Dear:) beautiful poem. Short but filled with imagery by the way nice rhyming scheme :)
Godbless&Love,love,love!

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 7:22am

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Thane a lot !!
Glad you like it!! :)

Sun, January 2nd, 2011 11:34pm

glitter snow426

such a magnificent feeling!!You have apinted a wonderful picture, very vivid and heartwarming!! GREAT STUFF!!

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 10:29am

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:)

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 10:23am

glitter snow426

You have "painted" a wonderful picture.sorry about that, I type very fast!! I truly love this special one!!

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 10:31am

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Thank you !
It means a lot to me :)

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 2:33am

ShortButCrazy

How glorious! I read it twice and I liked it both times.

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 1:33pm

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Thank you a lot :)
I think you would enjoy:
The definition of life. &
I thank god for love.
Thanx again :)

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 5:38am

Venessa Jinson

Such a great poem!!!

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 3:32pm

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Glad you like it!! :)

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 7:34am

Stuie50

A very nice poem. Great use of Imagery.
Keep on writing.

Stu

Tue, January 4th, 2011 4:02am

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thanx a lot!!
glad you like it :)

Mon, January 3rd, 2011 8:20pm

Aryamd

this is very sweet... =)

Wed, January 5th, 2011 5:34am

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Thanx :D

Tue, January 4th, 2011 11:51pm

Ally999

Awwww hanaf that is amazing, now im speechless and i can say you captured the words of love amazingly. I think love is the closet thing we have to magic really? :D i truly loved its heart warming!!

Fri, January 7th, 2011 3:59pm

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thank u sooo much!!!
love is magic!
thanx:D

Fri, January 7th, 2011 8:21am

Melodys locket

Love! i like the first verse, your very creative (:

Mon, January 31st, 2011 11:17am

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thank u soooo much!!
i appreciate u taking the time to read it:)
thanx:)

Mon, January 31st, 2011 7:58am