Hm...I'm supposing you plan on posting a sequel to this? I hope so, because this is a MAJOR CLIFFHANGER! and doesn't even establishes a setting even characters. -.-

You should turn this into a novel, I think it's very interesting. =]

P.S. If I sounded mad towards the start, don't worry I was just freaking out. xD

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Sat, June 21st, 2008 7:47pm

HAHAHA, thanks! =) Well I'm not sure if it will be a sequel because it was just some random thoughts... but your suggestion give me a thought... maybe I will make a suggestion! Thanks again!

~Maple Bowen

anticonformity93

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Sat, August 16th, 2008 9:56am

Woah! That was very intersting. In a good way. Please tell me you're going to write more. You just kind of left me hanging there. I want to know what's going to happen. lol.

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Sat, August 16th, 2008 1:03pm

I think this is a story that I'm going to leave hanging. I kind of like writing things that allow the reader to think what they will. Leaves the story more suspenseful. Thanks for the wonderful comment! =)

RazzleColaYing

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Wed, September 10th, 2008 3:27pm

AHHHH! freaky! my initial reaction was: "woah.... thats some deep, dark, creepy stuff"!! but that was ggggreat!

electricfire7319

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Sat, September 13th, 2008 12:39pm

I really think you should make this into a novel! It caught my attention immediatly! I do have one question though,Why did he cut his feet? Was it to go faster?