Poem by: mar1e
Submitted: June 02, 2007
Free of chains
Dances of wild
Root to soil
End of birth
Born then die!
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I really like this one too!I am a firm believer that the Earth wants to reach out beyond the stars.
I can philosophise to extreme reason the right and wrong of Human destruction done to the planet ..yet we all know one day it will die.
I suppose it's the same as our own lives ..we know the end is imminent..we can choose for a quicker demise through abuse or we can strengthen it through Love ..but in the end ..The circle of life must be completed or it turns into a spiral ..!hey wait a minute spirals and the universe go hand in hand ..there is No End .
I hear you :)Yes, even after death, it's a cycle, or a circle again once we are one with the earth. Like you mentioned, spirals and the universe. It is a complete process... Thank you for your deep thoughts and comment!
you have a wonderful way of putting so much info into so few words ,succint and brief. the essence of poetry,getting the message across fast and powerful in brevity............keep it up.
Thanks for your kind feedback. I like short and powerful poetries. I wanted this to come across that way, and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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