the mysterious park

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


 

There was once a girl named Sofia, she lived with her parents, when she was 8 years old her mother died of  an unknown reason, the forensic tried to decipher what had happened to her, but they could not find out what happened to her, the years went on, until one day she heard from a park that people who were going there said that there were many snakes, as she liked to explore, she asked her father for permission to go to that park, her dad did not let her go, she disobeyed him, and she lied to him saying she was going to do homework with a partner, her dad believed her and let her go, in the night her dad waited for her, it was 10 ... after 11 and she did not arrive, until her dad decided to call to the mother of his partner, and she told  him that Sofia had not gone that day to see her friend, he worried, called the police and the police could not do anything at that time of night so he decided to leave to look for her he felt that the world was turning against him because then he asked the people who passed by where he was going and everyone told him no, nobody had seen him ... it was 12 o'clock and he decided to send a message to all his contacts to tell him that his daughter had been lost, he decided to stop looking since he had to go to work the next day, the next day, when he was taking a bath, they were passing the news of an unknown girl who had found drowned in the park lake she wanted to go, her dad did not He was very important, until suddenly he received a call, it was from the grandmother of the girl claiming that as he happened to let a girl go to a park that no one goes because of  fear of snakes, the surprised girl told him that he hadn't  let her go to any park and did not pay attention to the news that was it was a lie, when he finished his call, then he  received another call, it was from the police telling him that they had just found his daughter, the happy one told him that where he was, the police said nothing, gave him a direction to go pick up his daughter, he was surprised because it was a place where people went to pray to people who had died, he went and gave him a box he told them that he wanted a box and The police answered him "search for her " he opened it and said where his daughter was, he said the address of the park where the snakes were, he was as fast as possible before something happened to his daughter, when he arrived there was a corpse with eagles, snakes, and spiders, he approached a little more to see who it was and when he saw that his daughter was a snake he was caught by the snake and started to roll around the father until he died, from there on  no one else went to that park .. .......


Submitted: November 18, 2017

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