Poem by: Marathongman
Submitted: August 25, 2008
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I liked this it was good. But eventually Cupid's Arrow becomes worth it.
pretty...it makes you wonder and question yourself...i like it.
The Beauty is love. The beast is your ego. The beast is selfish,greedy, fearfull it has excessive childish demands of being loved. Love me, love me love me it's incapable of giving love. The Beauty is willing to take the chance to truly love and be loved. The human heart knows no fear it's willling to love. The wheel of pain is LOVE or FEAR. The chance for a mature,loving nurturing,selfless relationship or isolation out of fear.
Thanls for your comment
it's lyfe you just got to learn to move on or linger in the past
great poem and so true...!
Thank you for your input and positve comment - I got so many comments that it is hard to reply so see my comment to Hayileee Hamilton - Thank You
Wow. That was really good. Short, but it says alot. Great job. :]
Thank You see my response to Hayileee Hamiltonnn - It's only because of the comments that I Realized What It Was About ! LOL
left alone to live in peace is the better... being shot by cupids arrow is a curse of a constant rain of endless pain and a hurricane that will perpetually turn your world upside down and leave not knowing who you are.
The Beauty is love
The Beast is your ego
I like your exploration of contrasts here in a very simple but very effective poem. Try the Cupid's arrow, take a chance on love - left alone in peace you will never know. "Better to have loved..." as the saying goes. Good poem - tried to read your latest but nothing was there?
THank you for an inspiring comment - Crystal meth should be posted
I agree, try the Cupid's arrow. This is a great read!!! "I liked it!"
Thank you very much definetly Cupid's arrow glad u enjoyed it
Very good poem. I like the struggle of emotions in this piece. This is wonderful.
It's another part of - Destined - and Along the lines of Dangerous Seduction - They were published in the local newspaper- looking back I was putting these flirtations right out there. - Points and Poison is another in the seriesLol) - Why go half way there were several women and I had no fear - I'm thinking about it now - What THe Hell Was I Thinking? lol
This is a cute poem. I liked it very much!
It's a very popular poem for some reason - Thanks for reading and commenting
Dejected But Symmetrical
that was nice. I enjoyed reading it.
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