Poem by: Marathongman
love, heart, crazy, chase, haunt, grab, marathongman
Submitted: October 10, 2008
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Such anger in this piece I like it...
Inspired by your Take Me - by the way there was /is no link to view your poem Takr Me in my e-mail today - thats an old poem I know. it showed up this morning
ilke it but its knda of kiddy if you know what i mean. and why do u curse. are saved.
I feel the same because those types of demands are chilldish just like cursing
I like it .It sounds like it should be whispered at the start and get louder and louder .It speaks to me that way
Thank you that's an excellent idea. I'll have to see if I can increase the size if the type as I go. Thanks for reading and an excellent comment
powerful!!! i like this one...
Thank you for reading and commenting
I loved this! I too felt that it should start as a whisper then get louder until lastly, in shrill voice. Pent up anger. It is an excellent piece.
That is a very good idea - I'm just learning how to format and place pictures - Thanks again
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