Son of a Caveman #15 - The Usual Suspects

Short Story by: Marathongman

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A very short caveman chapter

Heart attackers
Social climbers
Bedroom slippers
Accomplished liars

CAVEMOM

sexyreddress.jpgsexyreddressimagebysuddenparadox = sex
Extension ladders
Escaping artists
The lonliest
Falling hardest

CAVEDAD

Keenan = SexSex

CAVESON

caveman = sex

BAIT SHOP GIRL
Has bigger fish to fry

cavewoman = RELAXIT'SJUSTSEX

Baitshop Girls Husband
Secret sex
Part affection
Good liars
Avoid detection

Submitted: December 07, 2008

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Anastasia Starlena

LOL another fun person to add to the mix. Baitshop girls husband. Boy these cave people are fun. You know this is my new soap-opera. All My Children has now been replaced with As the Cave Turns.lol Next there needs to be a long lost cave daughter that is really biologically bait shop girl's and cave dad. She needs to be from when they met at the same bar cavemom found her naughty fun. Then of course the guy she had a fling with could also be bait shop girls husband and they are all force to share time on a seedy talk show with clubs. Ok just a thought. lol My brain is running away with your story sorry. It is brilliant as always.
Take Care,
Anastasia

Sun, December 7th, 2008 8:19pm

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lol -Keep thinking new ideas are always welcome. I felt Ishould post all the characters in one post. I enjoy the way it takes me on this journey. I found a new way to save the pics I use so I don't have to go looking all over the place to use them again. I have to introduce cavesons wife. I like the way Baitshop Girls husband is coming along. LMAO -
it's stressful, aganizing not always easy tro write but I wouldnt have it any other way. Thanks for the ideas , the comment.
I've already been collecting pictures of people who haven't been introduced yet. All I can say is expect surprises

Sun, December 7th, 2008 12:37pm

scott 37

Is that the promise of caveson's wife's return, that I see in the reply above?? Oh how I've been waiting.
Lov'n the pics. And that last piece from baitshop girl's fella is very amusing, indeed.

Mon, December 8th, 2008 9:49pm

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Cavesons wife coming real soon - Thanks for the comment

Mon, December 8th, 2008 2:02pm

Sharvanem

lol real good ... i read it after a bad night at work and it just brighten up my day!!!

Tue, December 9th, 2008 5:44am

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I'm glad I was able to put a smile on your face. Thank you for taking the time to comment

Tue, December 9th, 2008 2:50am

Gentlespirit

Loved the introduction of new characters. baitshop girl and now her husband. I cannot wait to read more. Sooooo funny.

Hmmmmmmm where IS the .......... ???

Sat, December 13th, 2008 4:52pm

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It has been taking over my life I love the creative process I love the challenge of finding the idea the words and the pictures it's a real challenge and I'm addicted to creativity