Son of a Caveman # 24 - Koffee Klatch

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

A very short chapter in the caveman series

CoffeeTime

Cavewife - Did you sleep well last night?

Caveson - Yes I did. It was such a relief
to express myself about you and our marriage.
I really held alot inside.

Cavewife - Would you care for a cup of
coffee?

Caveson - Yes please. All those years
of worrying about my wants,needs and
desires. I clung to you out of need, fear of
being rejected of being alone. There was
never any real expression of love.

Cavewife - It's funny because your wants,
needs and desires are the same as mine. It's
the very core of human nature to want to love
and be loved. Both males and femalesit's all
the same.

Caveson - WOW I wish I opened up and
talked to you before. I'm sorry.

Cavewife - There is no need for I'm sorrys.
There is no need for forgiveness. Nothing was
deliberate . We both behaved with what we
had to work with at the time.

Caveson - The hurting had to stop .

Cavewife - Exactly. Well I'm off to work make
yourself at home after all it is still half yours


Submitted: December 14, 2008

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Anastasia Starlena

Ahhh! I almost have tears. Brilliant piece.
Ana

Sun, December 14th, 2008 11:08pm

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Thank you as always - cry away its good for the soul

Mon, December 15th, 2008 2:20am

Gentlespirit

There is great warmth of feeling in this.....and I am not talking about the coffee. Nice. Makes me wonder where you are going to take your characters next!

Sun, December 14th, 2008 11:51pm

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Not sure myself I think some have had or will have an awakening and some I'm afraid are full of shit. They are not being completely honest with themselves

Mon, December 15th, 2008 2:19am

scott 37

Sorry mate, I thought that I'd already left a comment.
This is certainly a different pace, and I'm nearly getting attached to caveboy. But as the wise cavewife has made clear, he's still got some work ahead of him yet.
As I've just been saying to Ana, have an excellent Chrissy. This place is soon to get busier so I'll probably be away for a bit. Enjoy the season.

Wed, December 17th, 2008 8:57pm

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Thank you for the interest and comments and all that I appreciate it - Have a happy holiday as well

Wed, December 17th, 2008 1:04pm

scott 37

I've just noticed that you've classified this as a horror. Cheeky sod.

Wed, December 17th, 2008 8:59pm

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That was an accident

Wed, December 17th, 2008 1:02pm

Sharvanem

oh man ..... i dont like this lovey dovey stuff ... someone is gonna get hurt! S

Thu, December 18th, 2008 8:58am

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Yes but who? Even I don't know yet - We will both be surprised- Thanks again

Thu, December 18th, 2008 2:46am

Dinafromfuture

i like this sentence"The hurting had to stop"and i hope the hurting will stop.

Thu, December 18th, 2008 4:05pm

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Thank you very much for taking the time to commenting

Thu, December 18th, 2008 10:08am

Pratibha

And i am sure the days that followed helped them grow more closer to each other as human being....this is indeed an eye opener to me...such a lovely and thought provoking piece...

Sat, January 17th, 2009 8:21pm

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Thank you - it is nice to see you so involved and have very specific ideas about it

Sat, January 17th, 2009 3:56pm

Angelsong

aww, really sweet and relate-able (however you say it xD) he "loved" her but didn't love her because he just wanted some one to be with, but...oh i really dunno how to say it X_X i'll just say it the easy way: nice wokr! ^_^

Fri, February 27th, 2009 2:26am

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LOL Thank you for taking the time to comment

Sat, February 28th, 2009 2:30am

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