Short Story by: Marathongman
secrets, souls, hearts, truths, wounds, marathongman, colliding
Submitted: January 02, 2009
My thought Bubble
More secrets kept
Than truths been told
Kept inside of
Hearts and souls
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The plot thickens. It is amazing what secrets can do to people in life isn't it? Great job.
When secrets unravel
They're hard to handle
What a fab use of language! I really love this :0) shame they do not have I LOVE IT as opposed to I like it!
I LOVE IT and voted..... more more more, and er, where is the book??????? lol
Nope, not lettting you off the hook. told you so lol
Happy New Year!
If I haven't commented on some of your work it's because I'm straighting out the mess
LOL well they are a little strange - Thanks for commenting
Enigmatic... mysterious... dangerous... wishing you peace in the cave for 2009.
Thank you for taking the time to comment - wishing you a happy new year
After just being in to read Gentle Spirit's "Little Voice" poem, in this "chapter" you explore the voices inside that harbour hurts, secrets, old resentments. You write this brilliantly, so succinctly, so to the point - I see the "scars" even though you say nought about them. As I said to Vee I also relate very much, with hers and with your poem (though it is a collection of a series of work I see, must explore further one day?) - I have a similar poem written during a tough time "I sometimes see me".
Happy new Year to you.
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. It's a really nice compliment that you see the scars with out me saying much about them . Thank you once again
Love Your Work :)
Thank you for taking the time to comment
How is the computer mess? Have you lost much of your work, god I so hope not. I really am thinking of you!!!!
Slowly getting things back in order - I'm streamlining as I admit that I only use my computer as a word processor
So much and yet so little in your bubble...
Thank you for taking time to comment
when secrets r revealed, there is havoc for sure ...i am sure love believes, forgives and moves on....
but sometimes the scars r so deep that it never heals and paths divert
How very true - thank you cor taking time to comment
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