SHE
You scream
I shout
I throw
You out
Your ego
Gets bruised
You Demand
My love
So what
Big sissy
Go cry
To mommy
You Want
Home cooking
Go home
Pig out
Get stuffed
Eat more
Stay home
Mommas boy
HE
I want
Your love
I'll stamp
My feet
Where's mommy?
Where's love?
Where's daddy?
Big slug!
I learned
From dad
How to
Take love
SHE
You could've
Learned how
To give
Your love
I'm not!
Your mother!
I love!
You smother!
HE
I WANT
I COMMAND
YOUR LOVE
ON DEMAND
SHE
FUCK YOU!
Once again
Go home
Little man
Mommys cooking
Your favorite
She's waiting
For you
MOMMY
Welcome home!
DADDY
LET'S EAT!
Submitted: November 02, 2008
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I have several new ones. Hmm you can drop by... I hope you are well. I do like to read your work. I am on your fan list. You my not get updates any more because I left and came back. You didn't fan request me back.. If you want to I will put you back on..
Take Care,
Anastasia
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Yeah whatever it takes
Mon, November 3rd, 2008 1:24am
That's a lot said, in what is really only a few words. And for some reason I find myself liking Daddy's detached position, all though he's as much to blame. Well done.
Scott
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Yeah Dad is only worried about eating and believing everything is ok -Detached is the perfect word for
dad - Thank you for reading and a fantastic comment. PS it was a challenge to use 2 words per line - no more no less
Forgive the language but two words: FUCKING AMAZING. I loved this!
Wed, November 5th, 2008 2:40am
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No problem about the languaga I'm glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reading and commenting
Wed, November 5th, 2008 2:41am
xD thanks for the nice ab workout
i had to read it over a few times ;] too funny.
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Thank you once again for taking time to comment
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Anastasia Starlena
Ok it is sad in a funny sort of way... I can see this in real life. Good Job.
Sun, November 2nd, 2008 10:50pmAuthor
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Not everything I write is meant to be funny.Although they usually are. I have seen it alot in everyday life before I became a hermit. So anyway thanks for reading and commenting. I haven't seen any of your work lately?
Sun, November 2nd, 2008 3:23pm