Poem by: Marathongman
lips, kissing, liquid, licking, dripping, protein, pacifier, sipping
Submitted: September 22, 2008
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hi! m. lovely. this is the sort of liplicious poem i like. i devour ice creams and chocolates (seeing me doesn't seem like that, eh!). were i u, i'd've just written VANISHED! for in our home, these delights don't last.
by the way, who's the pacifier here. the topic is so delicious i'm hungry again. keep it up. lol. ;-)
LOL That would be me
I like that VANISHED - The original was FACIAL - Then
BIG GULP - I don't consider it finished - Hey wait a minute - Finished - could be the last word - I like it
Thanks for commenting
When I was a kid my Mom used to use
"Vanishing Cream" and always afraid
she would disappear! scary stuff.lol
Lots of edgy little interpretations
here...I like it. I must read more
of your poems...don't like the genre
though, too convoluted; I'm just a
Rhymer not a poet so don't take any
thing I say too seriously, don't
understand any of it but do believe
"that You're good", real good!
Kind Regards, Manyfacets
Thank you - say whatever you like it's ok - any comment is appreciated its funny because I was writing I was writing over used phrases like - No diamonds that shine - No facets to life - There's no FACETS to life - There's nothing so sharp - That cuts butter with knife - All over used phrases
Wow this is an interesting little poem. You are so creative.
I'm considering reworking it - I just can't put my finger on it- it was / is a nice title but it's lacking something - LOL it just doesnt flow
why do people think this has anything to do w/ sweet treats????? in my experience, it has NEVER been sweet! write on thongman. write on.
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