Criticism's Wall

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
This poem I wrote describes the true definition of love. I have had problems with love because of appearance and not true beauty. I wrote this to make others feel better about them selves and hopefully touch the hearts that don't look at true beauty.

Submitted: January 29, 2012

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Submitted: January 29, 2012



Life is a story with pages unwritten,

A beautiful love story that's somewhat hidden.

When life gets flooded and hard to bare,

There is someone that is always there.

Between the wall of lies and the people to please,

Love will never be what it was meant to be.

Beauty is in the heart, and not on the plaster of the skin.

True love is breaking through the criticism and reaching in.



- a poem by Marissa Sircy

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