C'est La Vie

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Flash Fiction Fun

a short, funny story of a young man taking a trip to Paris for the first time - EVER!

I love Paris. I have never been there before because I hate to fly and the thought of traveling across the Atlantic ocean scares me to death! Many years later, visiting this spectacular city was finally going to become a reality.

I was ready to go, my pulse slightly elevated at the thought of travelling abroad - it has been awhile since I have travelled, and this time, I was really looking forward to the venture.

In a blink of an eye, I was suddenly in Paris!  What a sight - I was completely in awe at what I saw: the Eiffel tower out in the far distance, the cars travelling along the Rue De La Huchette, a glimpse at the Champs Elysees, the lights of the city illuminating the night time sky - what a spectacular view!

As I walked along the Rue Du Chat Qui Peche,  I could smell the aroma of the strong Parisian Coffee, the sweet taste of chocolate croissants as I approached the Cafe  De Flore, with cigarette smoke filling the night time air!  Ahh....I was in Paris at last and I was finally given a taste of what it was like to visit one of the world's most beautiful cities.

My visit would be short. I was being called in to dinner and I had to be up early for work the following day.

I was so crestfallen as I got up from my chair and removed the Virtual Reality Headset. Under my breath, I  whispered, "C'est La Vie " as I walked into the dining room, my dinner waiting for me......

 


Submitted: July 06, 2017

© Copyright 2021 Mark Reece Healey. All rights reserved.

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Derwin Gonzalez

Nice, great piece of flash fiction.

Sun, July 16th, 2017 6:04am

Mark Reece Healey

Thank you very much, Derwin. I enjoy reading your stories, too!

Sun, July 16th, 2017 10:59am

Corine Pelletier

Ah really good. You got me I really thought he was in Paris.

Sun, July 16th, 2017 11:26pm

Author
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Sun, July 16th, 2017 7:06pm

hullabaloo22

Ha! You got me there, Mark. So descriptive for such a short piece, and that ending.....brilliant!

Tue, July 18th, 2017 4:22pm

Author
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I am so glad you enjoyed it. Again, I loved writing it....I actually "took myself" there while I added the finishing touches.

Tue, July 18th, 2017 9:33am

Broken_Writer

I enjoyed that's actually really good. I might actually have to take your suggestion and try flash fiction.

Wed, July 26th, 2017 12:16pm

Author
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Thanks! I think you should. Both genres ( Flash and poetry ) are short prose and interesting stories can be told in fewer words. Try it - I think you will enjoy it!

Thanks again!

Mark

Wed, July 26th, 2017 6:53am

Aquarius

Ah yes, dear Friend. C'est la vie!

Thank you for sharing your dream with us. Maybe one of these days you'll really be going. I have been to Paris and have to admit I didn't like it very much.

God bless and happy dreaming!

With love - Aquarius

Thu, July 27th, 2017 1:06pm

Katherine M

Haha! I think this one is my favorite out of the two I've read so far by you. Brilliant ending, having caught on to your twists I expected him to be staring at a billboard outside of a cafe. I really enjoyed this one!
-Katherine

Fri, July 28th, 2017 12:41am

Author
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Thank you. I will fill you in on a little secret: it's my favorite, too!

Thu, July 27th, 2017 7:38pm

Christopher Patrick

Cute! You would need an appointment for the Eiffel Tower anyway.

Fri, July 28th, 2017 2:06am

Author
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Hahaha! For sure.

Thank you for your comments!

Thu, July 27th, 2017 7:35pm

Vance Currie

It's great how you conjured up such a vivid image of Paris in just a few paragraphs. The aromas were mouth watering until I hit the cigarette smoke, but even that helped make it all seem real. It occurs to me that just reading a story like this takes one into a kind of virtual reality.

Wed, August 2nd, 2017 3:40am

Author
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Thanks...I really loved writing this piece!

Tue, August 1st, 2017 9:16pm

Mark Reece Healey

It is my hope that when you read this story, you come to realize that the power of the mind should never be underestimated.

I hope that you enjoy this piece as much as I enjoyed writing it!

Mark

Fri, August 4th, 2017 12:58pm

Mubadang

Great write-up. Reading through, I just picture most of the places you mentioned. A great way to revisit Paris without being there.

Fri, August 4th, 2017 9:45pm

Author
Reply

I couldn't agree with you more. Stay tuned for a follow up story!!

Thank you for your kind words!

Fri, August 4th, 2017 2:50pm

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