Castle walls

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Who am I?

Who am I?

I'm a secret.

something nobody knows.

They may have heard rumors,

but that's as far as they go.

 

What am I?

I'm  a castle.

With my walls built up high.

This is the place my true feelings lie.

 

Where am I?

I am lost

in a perpetual world of blame.

I fear now I will never be the same.

 

who are you?

what are you?

where have you gone?

I guess I'll be alone from now on.


Submitted: January 27, 2014

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Understood.......feeling it

Mon, January 27th, 2014 3:49am

Luke Mullen

A sentiment that we can all understand - elegantly expressed. Overall your execution is good but if I could offer one piece of advise it would be to relax on the rhyme slightly in order to improve the flow. I enjoyed it, and with a slight tweak here an there it would really hit the mark. the process of honing our skills and discovering our strengths is a constant one, keep it going - keep writing. Luke.

Tue, September 16th, 2014 9:19pm

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