Crime Scene

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic
A detective is called to a crime scene during a blackout and he suspects that the killer might still be there.

Submitted: October 15, 2014

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“This is the place”. I stepped out of the police car and walked inside the building. It was 1:00 am and a fierce storm caused a total blackout in half of the city.“The elevator isn’t working, we will have to take the stairs.” said the cop who drove me there. Three floors later we arrived the crime scene.

 There was another cop near the open apartment door. “John” he said to the other cop “I see you brought the detective unharmed”

“He is a pretty good driver, but we had to go slowly since we could barely see.” I replied.

After we introduced eachother I learned that the other cop’s name was Mark and the driver’s is John.

“How long have you been here?” I asked

“About forty minutes.” Mark answered “We recieved a noise complaint from the neighbours and when we arrived and saw what’s inside, John figured it would be best to call the station.”

“Very well, go talk to the neighbours while I examine the crime scene.” They went as I asked and I entered the apartment.

It was dark, very dark so I turned my flashlight on and what I saw made me shiver. There was a male body inside a pool of blood in the middle of the living room. I aproached the body and as I got closer I could see that there was a hole in his abdomen and that his stomach was ripped somehow. I couldn’t find any prints but when I looked at his leg I could see that someone had grabbed him there. Maybe when he was trying to run for the door? But if so, what was he running from?

BAM! A lightning striked outside illuminating the whole room for a few seconds. During that time I thought I could see someone in the corner. Or was it my imagination? I decided to enter a room that looked like a bedroom. I was right, it was a bedroom but inside there was a dead woman lying in the bed. When I got closer I could see that her state was similar to the man: covered in blood, hole in the body ripped organs… My guess would be that something attacked the women when she was sleeping and that made the man wake up and when he saw what was happening he tried to run to the door but ended being grabbed by someone… or something.

BAM! Another lightning. This time I clearly saw something running towards the kitchen. I pulled out my gun but when I entered the kitchen it was empty. I noticed there was another room I didn’t check so I walked to the door and when I opened it the room was… absolutely normal. Judging by the pink wallpaper and dolls that was a little girl’s room. But where was this little girl? For a moment a terrible possibility crossed through my head. Could it be the little girl causing this? No, it was a stupid idea. She didn’t had the strength to do that.

There was only one place left to check: the bathroom. I was leaving the bedroom when my flashlight died. In panic, I grab my phone and used its light to guide me around the apartment, although it wasn’t nearly as bright has the flashlight.

I entered the bathroom and nothing seemed out of order… until I heard a noise coming from the cabinet below the sink. I pulled out my gun and when I opened the cabinet… there was a little girl crying inside!

“Hey there” I said “Its alright, I’m not going to hurt you. I’m a cop see?” and I showed her my badge and she stopped crying. “What happened here?”

 “I was sleeping when I heard mommy screaming from her room. I opened their door and I saw a monster on top of her! I was so scared and it was so dark! I entered the bathroom and hid in this closet so that thing couldn’t find me. I thought it was over but then I heard daddy screaming too and I was too scared to move.”

“You did the right thing. Now come, let’s get you out of there.”

I was helping her get out of the cabinet when we heard a growl and heavy footsteps. “We have to get out of here!” I grabbed the girl’s hand and dashed to the door. I was reaching the door handle when the thing grabbed my arm. It was big, had a demonic face and red skin. It’s eyes were red and his breath was hot. It had a spiked tail and strong arms. The last thing I remember was a little girl screaming and it’s teeth beeing buried into my neck.


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