Play My Heart...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Angellynn "COLOUR ME" POETIC MOOD CHALLENGE

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Play my heart as an instrument of your choice,
I can hear the distance in your voice...

Play the guitar with my strings of hope,
Play it gently or otherwise, I lack the will to cope!

Play the drums with the beats of my swollen heart,
Play the ending to what didn't even start!

Play my soul as a trumpet, make melodies or just noise,
I guess feelings can be manipulated into simple toys!

Play the flute following the notes of my pain,
Play me as you please, play me once again!

Play me tender, play me sweet,
Play me in your solitude or in the street!

Play me as you wish and as you may,
I just hope you're proud of the mess you play!


Submitted: December 17, 2009

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angellynn

So very deep. I loved it. Good Luck, and thank you for a speedy submission.
Angellynn:)

Thu, December 17th, 2009 11:54pm

Mistress of Word Play

This was just a really great write. You did so well on the emotions and the words. Nice job. Great submission. Susan :)

Thu, December 17th, 2009 11:57pm

NazireC

Wonderfully written and I enjoyed the repetitions.

Tue, December 22nd, 2009 11:03pm

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thank you Nazire :)

Wed, December 23rd, 2009 3:11am

normallyweird

Beautiful!

Tue, December 29th, 2009 12:00am

Graeme Montrose

Simply beautiful!

Tue, December 29th, 2009 12:55pm

WalkingDisaster

I also love this one. :D
Especially the part where it says:
'Play me as you wish and as you may,
I just hope you're proud of the mess you play!'
Beautifully well written. ^-^

Sun, January 3rd, 2010 6:54am

Sapphire Tears

wow...it's beautiful...i

Thu, July 1st, 2010 5:49am

Sapphire Tears

i like it* :)

Thu, July 1st, 2010 5:52am

Christian Taylor

Got one word to say....beautiful!

Thu, July 1st, 2010 3:04pm

CJBowker

This poem is very meaningful. I like it :)

Fri, July 2nd, 2010 4:44am

Shweta

Wonderful!!! U hav flow on it.....emotion is very deep.Gud work!!!

Fri, July 2nd, 2010 5:44am

lanchava

Beautiful

Fri, July 2nd, 2010 8:15am

Azaleas secrets

"i can hear the distance in your voice"... lovely expression and soo meaningful!!!

Fri, July 2nd, 2010 10:31am

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