Breaking Through The Wall

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Pretty much about missing someone, I had fun writting this one, so dont care if it sucks :)

If you like it please tell me

Trying to get to her but I can't

It's like a wall is blooking my path

People walk right past

But I still hear them laugh

A lonely heart

It's only the start

Next i will fall apart

Got to break through the wall

Maybe there is a door

Is she still there?

I can't hear her heart

I'm broken and lost, back at the start

She is gone but will be back

To put me back on track

I miss her so much

That smile and her touch

I can see her eyes amongst the stars

And in the headlights of passing cars

I wish the time went really fast

Not shore how long I will last

The Taste The Touch, her ring tone

She tells me she's coming home

My dry lips

Miss her kiss

Tomorrow she will be home

One more night on my own

When she opened the door

It knocked down the wall...

Submitted: January 09, 2009

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Me Against The World

Oh, a little bit of a twist ending. I like!

Also interesting how much emotion you can show in little words. ^.^ Great poetry.


Fri, January 9th, 2009 10:11pm


Thank you, glad you liked it

Fri, January 9th, 2009 7:27pm

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