A repetitive poem.. tell me what you think :)

On this day,

The sky is red.

The sky is red.

Like my blood.

On this day,

My family's dead.

My family's dead.

Like my heart.

On this day,

The sea will flood.

The sea will flood.

Like my tears.

On this day,

I can't see god.

I can't see god.

Like my life.

On this day,

There is no chance.

There is no chance.

I am dead.


Submitted: August 05, 2010

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