Fourth and Long

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Sports  |  House: Booksie Classic

Describing challenges of life through american football :)

Fourth and long The impossible feat Don't get it right And we're all dead meat Fourth and long Heartbeat racing We were in the lead Now we're the ones chasing Fourth and long Not so elite Time to attempt The impossible feat Fourth and long Snap and drop back Tosses it up How'd he do that? The clock runs out No more fourth and long We should have been the champs What went wrong?


Submitted: May 10, 2010

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MyaBaybeii

ahhh, i do like this :)
its creative alright :D
me thinks the way you have structured it somehow looses the flow, but perhaps thats the point. i enjoy the comparison and the idea is a feasable one. i like the way you use wrong and right. oposites, and yet they seemingly say the same thing.
"now we`re the ones chasing" is my favourite part. its catchy, memorable and to the point. much like the small poem actually. a good one matt :)
awaiting the next one now :DD

xmyax

(89 words: mya keeps her words, unlinke some she could name!)

Tue, May 11th, 2010 1:35am

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