Grimey Tales Of Grange Valley!

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This is a poem for a story I'm working on. I have written this as it will be the introduction but I also wanted to entice a few people before I start writing the story.

the story I will develop will be in chapters, and each chapter i am looking for peoples feedback and ideas for the next piece, If I like any ideas I may work on them :D so please give feedback.

Submitted: October 28, 2012

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I don't have a job, my cash is running low
Stuck in a ragged rut, makes my anger grow
People’s prejudices put me in a bitter hole
My girl's in our homely hut, pissed over our swindler role
Times like these I wish I still smoked
I’m craving, as tears leave my face soaked

So much ambition in my heart, but no opportunity
School considered me smart, but I’m in this shoddy society
I wish I knew where to start, they call the poor a minority
I just want to unfurl, but they won’t let me
Can’t even look after my girl, Oh god Judy

Six months without a smoke
Judy thinks it’s all a joke
After today I’m considering sparking this roach
Only way I can escape these peoples reproach
A chance to hide away, help forget how they gloat
I’ll give a damn another day, tonight my mind can float


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