Ashes Divide II - Tide of tears

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Ashes Divide Part 2

And it shines on sky... from my quiet but unspoken soul.

I can hear the noisy shore now, screaming for the tide of tears inside my heart. I can see the sand starring at me, some with sympathy, and some with an evil chance; a chance to break me down and make me part of them. That huge dark stone with muddy texture now awaits me to stand on it as a leader and face those waves.
Million sharp memories were flashing in my mind. Each one bringing a new question inside me. I called his name, closed my eyes as tight as I could, and fell down on my knees. But I then felt the ashes felling on my face. They were tender and blinding me into my colorful past.
Sitting with my eyes closed and hearing our boat burning; I thought of all those times, all those moments, and all the dreams. That sweet flute, those rainbow colored clouds touching my body with there soft and cozy existence, those waves grasping me; where have they gone? Sweet tones and a charming sound with ability to give me powers were not there anymore, all I can hear were cracking sounds of the burning boats. With my shivering breath and broken body I brought my both hands together to pray someone to help me, with a hope that everything will be fine...


Submitted: January 14, 2009

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Marathongman



I like it -very well written and interesting

Fri, January 16th, 2009 5:00pm

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