last minute understanding

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

when your all alone what can you do?

when the light is gone

when your heart seems to stray

when all of the joy in life

has suddenly gone away

what will you do

to avoid the fires of hell

what will the others think

of you as well

when you just want to end it

when all you can do is lie

when the others around you

already know you want to die

when your done with waiting

when your done with being this sad

when everything around you

just makes you plain mad

when you take the knife to your wrist

and cut it up towards your palm

when all you feel is the blade

you start to feel calm

when all the pain has subsided

when the worries of this world are gone

when you know your going to die

you understand that this is wrong

Submitted: March 29, 2012

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Cameron Johnson

This is very good work. I really like your style. I can really relate to the message. I would be honored to have you read some of my work and see if you can understand what I am trying to get out. Keep writing, you have a new fan.

Thu, March 29th, 2012 3:21pm


Thanks and I will,yeah a new faaaan!

Thu, March 29th, 2012 12:20pm

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