All alone in the eerie night
With the creatures not of light
Can you escape your bretherns call
Fight amoungst them, Rise and Fall
Keep them safe or leave them be
Do what you will, Don't listen to me
But remeber the price is yours
If you don't save them from dangers jaws
Vampire bat and owl in oak
Dry your tears and see through smoke
To the truth do not wait
For all time wasted you could be late
Unicorns tears and the final hour
Feel yourself in my power
Evil yes, that may be so
My soul as black as feathers on crow
Defeat me and all be well
Do what you can to stop my spell
Its cast already feel the dance
Stop it now, here's your chance
So prevail young friend, I wanted to lose
To feel for once the chance to choose
This fate of mine was written for me
But you my friend will always be free
Sorry it happend, sorry it started
At least i was forgiven before i departed
Submitted: June 11, 2009
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Amazing MC your poems always blow me away!!!
Thu, June 11th, 2009 8:34am
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thanx liz, i love your writing to.
Thu, June 11th, 2009 2:19pm
amazing again MC :)
Sun, June 14th, 2009 12:18am
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yay.
Sun, June 14th, 2009 11:30pm
great poem
Tue, June 16th, 2009 6:16am
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thanx
Tue, June 16th, 2009 1:07amFacebook Comments
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Brian W
You write this well at a young age WOW I also like your stlye of writing. Another good poem but a small hiccup towards the end unless
Thu, June 11th, 2009 8:30am". So prevail young friend
I wanted to lose"
This was supposed to be one line??
Keep writing you are good
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yes it was meant to be i line. Thanx for pointing it out though.
Thu, June 11th, 2009 2:19pm