Forgiven and Departed

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Poem about being wrong and then being forgiven and moving on.

All alone in the eerie night

With the creatures not of light

Can you escape your bretherns call

Fight amoungst them, Rise and Fall

Keep them safe or leave them be

Do what you will, Don't listen to me

But remeber the price is yours

If you don't save them from dangers jaws

Vampire bat and owl in oak

Dry your tears and see through smoke

To the truth do not wait

For all time wasted you could be late

Unicorns tears and the final hour

Feel yourself in my power

Evil yes, that may be so

My soul as black as feathers on crow

Defeat me and all be well

Do what you can to stop my spell

Its cast already feel the dance

Stop it now, here's your chance

So prevail young friend, I wanted to lose

To feel for once the chance to choose

This fate of mine was written for me

But you my friend will always be free

Sorry it happend, sorry it started

At least i was forgiven before i departed

Submitted: June 11, 2009

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Brian W

You write this well at a young age WOW I also like your stlye of writing. Another good poem but a small hiccup towards the end unless
". So prevail young friend

I wanted to lose"
This was supposed to be one line??
Keep writing you are good

Thu, June 11th, 2009 8:30am


yes it was meant to be i line. Thanx for pointing it out though.

Thu, June 11th, 2009 2:19pm


Amazing MC your poems always blow me away!!!

Thu, June 11th, 2009 8:34am


thanx liz, i love your writing to.

Thu, June 11th, 2009 2:19pm


amazing again MC :)

Sun, June 14th, 2009 12:18am



Sun, June 14th, 2009 11:30pm


great poem

Tue, June 16th, 2009 6:16am



Tue, June 16th, 2009 1:07am

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