Free Me, Don't leave Me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A persons suffering after never moving on after losing their love.

I saw the trees and breathed the air

So free, so young, without a care

The years passed by so fast

We never thought it wouldn't last

But in the winter's cold embrace

I felt the grief that holds time and space

For in that freezing time of year

Fell many and one icy tears

He left this world and me behind

His smile and warmth and eyes that shined

Never do i not weep

And wish for an eternal sleep

With him, safe and free

With him, forever, eternally

To do it all again would be a gift

To hold time and make it shift

I am old and memories fade

But feeling last though darken in shade

The years of youth have passed in a blink

And in shadows do i now slink

I want freedom, from this curse

Hopefully in a black plumed hearse

Death and ends i do not fear

Only grief and more than one tear

Set me free of life's dear hold

Let me die and jion the fold

God though there may be

I only want to be with he

Submitted: July 01, 2009

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Brian W

What a beautiful although sad poem I felt the loneliness and sorrow of her missing and waiting in vain to join her one love. Fantastic writing. you amaze me being this good

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 7:48am


Thanx and though its sad and lonely for some reason i never have met or felt the way she does and yet the words still come to me. It weird i know but still its great you liked it.

Thu, July 2nd, 2009 2:02am

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