The hero comes

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem about a heroine.

It rises and falls

It holds us all

It sways and dances

Its luck and chances

It loves and hates

It defies the fates

It keeps and leaves

It sews and weaves

Its good and bad

Its happy and sad

It moves and stays still

It plays with us to it will

Maybe life is slightly cruel

But who here will face it in a duel

Death and life the balance is tipped

The weaves of the universe become ripped

And in light standing there

The hero comes, she better beware

Human though she may be

She has more feeling than you or me

Death will quake when he hears heer name

She is a lioness, who will never be tame

Save us all, people wail in fear

She silences them with the rise of her spear

Maybe she fell or maybe she rose

But forgotten not, as history shows


Submitted: June 12, 2009

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Chococat

oOoOoOoOoOoO, interesting! ????

Fri, June 12th, 2009 7:54am

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whats with the 0o0o0oos?

Fri, June 12th, 2009 12:56am

MissChildish

WOW you do tell the story really well! Your poems are always an entertaining read!!!

Fri, June 12th, 2009 7:58am

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thanx liz.

Fri, June 12th, 2009 5:20am

Jacs

wow awesome as poem........really good rhymes in there well done!! :)

Sat, June 13th, 2009 8:06am

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thanx jacki, i'll have to read your stuff to.

Sat, June 13th, 2009 4:31pm

JAW

awesome MC. :) i promise 2 read all ur stuff today :) anyway...luv it, very well written

Sun, June 14th, 2009 12:03am

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yay.

Sun, June 14th, 2009 11:30pm

Brian W

Great poem. I read the first part and seen IT = LIFE and you explained it well. Then the
hero arrives to restore the proper balance and again your poetry is magic describing all. Now last line??? Who in history was it???
Again well written and the flow and rhyme perfect.

Mon, June 15th, 2009 5:16am

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I never base my poems or stories on real life unless i have to because i find it more restricting, so the person could be anyone, you, me who knows certainly not me.

Sun, June 14th, 2009 11:29pm

apocalypso

WOW MC ITS AWESOME!

Tue, June 16th, 2009 6:15am

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thanx

Tue, June 16th, 2009 1:07am

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