Lover:
I see your silhouette, The curtain falls
I see your face, its my blood that calls
But you will endure
Always wishing for a cure
Lover:
Becuase of me you found your heart
So do we now part
Before you answer think on this
You and me and eternal bliss
Lover:
Drink from me and i from you
For you there's nothing i won't do
I'll set you free
In the arms of immortality
Vampire:
Do not ask of me what i cannot give
I will not let you die so i can live
Remeber those you leave behind
Do you think leaving them is truly kind
Vampire:
No my love, i will not try
Cursing you, i'd rather die
I'll always be here
You do not have to fear.
Vampire:
I'll keep you in my arms embrace
Free from the suffering do many face
I'll love you forever
Impossible you say but never say never
For this is the only reason i will keep existing
You will be safe as long as i keep resisting
Our memories will keep us alive
It will save us from hell's firey dive
Submitted: June 29, 2009
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Another wonderful poem M.C! Very interesting conversation...I'm still annoyed you can even write a poem let alone make one into a conversation! But Well Done anyway, ^_^
Wed, July 1st, 2009 7:48amFacebook Comments
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Brian W
Wow your poems always impress me. Great flow and rhyme and I like how you got a poem from a conversation and a love poem at that.
Mon, June 29th, 2009 10:26pmNow critical comments :-) Near the beginning is one spelling mistake "Because" and this line "Free from the suffering do many face" "many do face" to me sounds better BUT I failed at english so I am most likely wrong. That is it. Your poem is near perfect and I hope to write poems this good one day.
My appologises if I offended you.
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no offece taken. Thanx, i definatly didn't spot them, your a big help, though i doubt i'll get around to changing them.
Mon, June 29th, 2009 4:57pm