Song: Sickest Love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

First song I wrote, If you don't like it don't bitch!!!

Sickest Love

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(Verse One)

Watching the moon

I know you are too

We're wrapped in this anger

and the stars are fading

Has the book closed

cus my hopes are deteriorating

This book is so full

but has no ending

Can we write a new begining

(Chorus)

I just wanna scream:

You

Hate

I

Love

You

Kill

I

Trust

You

Youch

I Die

You. Live. In. Me

(Verse Two)

Things have gone so unheard

Only Masequers have spoken

There's oceans inbetween your heart and mine

I'm miles away from you

Decades from your eyes

Those eyes are entrancing

(chorus)

I just wanna scream:

You

Hate

I

Love

You

kill

I

Trust

You

Youch

I

Die

You. Live. In. Me

(Verse Three)

Yet you hold the key

Sealing my lips

I no longer feel the need for someone else

I want you

You soften the blow

with your cold touch

I ache for that touch

(chorus)

You're just screaming:

You. Kill. Our. Love

I. Trust. Your. Touch

You die in my arms

cus you live within me

You hold my key


Submitted: August 25, 2008

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BloodyBlade

MMK! i luv it. at the chorus part i can imagine a screamo part. people r screaming it. i screamed it to my slef and it was pretty tight. kinda liked it. maybe i can make sumthin up wit my piano.

Mon, August 25th, 2008 2:53am

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lol, cool. don't you hate ur piano? I thought you got pissed at it or sumthin? heheh! thnx for the comment though Eric.

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xxxsomeone

Mon, August 25th, 2008 6:22am

Astrocam the 2nd

Hey that song is pretty cool. I'm working on writing one myself with my keyboard. It's harder than I thought, since I'm shy and can't sing XD

Tue, August 26th, 2008 11:09pm

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lol, I can't sing either. *shrugs* thnx for the comment.

Tue, August 26th, 2008 4:21pm

ConcreteAngel

I luvvveeeddd it :) excellent work and yes like BloodyBlade said i imagined the chorus part being screamed lol luv your use of words

Mon, September 8th, 2008 3:56am

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hehe! thank you verrrryyyy much!

Mon, September 8th, 2008 5:34am

DomXD

Yeah i agree with Eric and i love this

it's really good lydia

nice work

xxx

dominique

Sun, October 5th, 2008 11:23pm

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hehe, thank yous dominique. :) I love all your comments.

Sun, October 5th, 2008 4:41pm

haleydanielleh

i was confused a bit in the song. then i read it over and over, its a blonde thing, but i love it. I was singin/screaming it.. then my brother looked at me like i was insane, anywho.. i love it, and the picture. your amazing(:

Sat, January 3rd, 2009 6:59pm

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Hehe, thank you very much for commenting, even though in my opinion it sucks. XD

Lids?

Sat, January 3rd, 2009 3:53pm

Mattie

That was nice and somwhat sad, but loved it none the less


:)

Wed, January 7th, 2009 12:41pm

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Thank you very much.

Lids?

Wed, January 7th, 2009 9:35am

xxFallenAngelxx

love.

Fri, January 9th, 2009 12:46am

Author
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I ? u for being such a great fan. XD XD XD

Lids?

Thu, January 8th, 2009 4:48pm

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