Thoughts (Revised)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
A random poem. I wrote it before Christmas when I got bored in class.

Feel free to comment...good comments. But constructive criticism is very welcome.

Submitted: January 06, 2013

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Submitted: January 06, 2013





  • by ~MEBwrittingsDec 30, 2011, 2:13:56 PM
  • Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse
Deeply delved in what we call mind
The painful surrender to which that is mine
Struggling to get and wanting to find
Trying to look back and somewhat acting fine
Loosing all the feeling you have
Never really knowing what that will cost
This pitiful scene is just too sad
Everything I know is gone,it's lost
It's painful just to be breathing everyday
When you're longing for life just to slip away
Wondering if they'll ever be
A day when there can be a you and me.



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