Can't say a word

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

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The blade crawls

Across the skin

Pecking at the gates

It’s a sin

You can’t say a word

Can’t cry or there’ll hear

Just take the blade

And the rest is clear

Your arm grows weak

Stinging from the cut

But I can’t stop

Can’t stop

I grow tears in my eyes

Feel weak and distressed

So I pick up the blade

I have to complete my test

One slice, two slice

Down on it goes

If I can’t stop

It’ll go down to my toes

Can’t say a word

Can’t scream or there’ll hear

My arm feels like fire

Burning through the sear

Can’t say a word

Not a word


Submitted: April 03, 2012

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lilyrose 1997

very strong i really like this poem and can relate to it very nice work

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 9:53am

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Thanks, I was pretty upset when I wrote this as you can probably tell, Thank you for reading

Tue, April 3rd, 2012 2:57am

Ian Dawn

Strong and deliberate I love the emotion you have in this but one thing I noticed and that is the angst of death is missing

Tue, April 10th, 2012 5:24am

Author
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Is it? I didn't notice. I was pretty our of it when I wrote this but I'm glad you like it, Thanks for commenting

Tue, April 10th, 2012 12:30am

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