Just tell me why.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Something I wrote when I was bored and feeling down. Its more of a song then a poem.

I can’t see in front of me

I can’t see inside of me

Wherever you went

You took a part of me with you

I look behind me

I see the emptiness

And I know you’re gone

Away from me

Just tell me why

You decided to leave me here

Just tell me why

You left a single tear

Rolling down my cheek

I think I deserve a reason

Why you’re gone

You left blood on the doorstep

When you left me here alone

You walked away without a trace

And now I’m lost forever

I look behind me

I see the emptiness

And I know you’re gone

Away from me

Just tell me why

You decided to say goodbye

Just tell me why

Your gone without a pry

You left a single tear

Rolling down my cheek

When you left that night

Just tell me why

I found I’m lost

I can’t see straight

I don’t know why

You disappeared

Without a trace

I really just want you back

Here with me

But you’re gone and I finally see

You decided to leave me

You left a single tear

Rolling down my cheek

Just tell me why

You decided to leave me here

Just tell me why

You left a single tear

Rolling down my cheek

I think I deserve a reason

Just tell me why

You decided to say goodbye

Just tell me why

Your gone without a pry

You left a single tear

Rolling down my cheek

When you left that night

Just tell me why

I look behind me

I see the emptiness

And I know you’re gone

Away from me

Just tell me why


Submitted: April 08, 2012

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Blackdragon99

This is awesome Meg :). Sounds like a song actually. One comment is
And now I'm lost forever now
I would remove one of the now cause it kind of jarred for me.

Sun, April 8th, 2012 11:59pm

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thanks, I wrote it thinking of it as a song. And yeah thats probably a good idea, thanks

Sun, April 8th, 2012 5:54pm

Ian Dawn

Nice job I agree with BD it sounds like song lyrics it has such good form all teh way thru.

Tue, April 10th, 2012 5:21am

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Thanks, lol Im trying to write music but I'm failing terribly haha, Thanks for commenting

Tue, April 10th, 2012 12:31am

stuckinthemoment

a little long for my taste, i like poems to be short and sweet!
but it was very good and meaningful :D
xoxo ~ Layla

Wed, April 11th, 2012 2:04pm

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Thanks :)

Wed, April 11th, 2012 7:47am

Ghonesis

Great work. I'd love to hear this as a song!

Sun, April 29th, 2012 11:18am

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Thanks, I wrote this as a song and it feels like a song. Thank you for reading

Sun, April 29th, 2012 4:19am

ashi17

Melancholic piece, good work !

Mon, November 19th, 2012 4:27am

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