Won't go away.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Something I wrote when I was very down, I know its shit but I needed to vent.

 

The pain is with me everyday

It won’t go away

Just won’t go away

 

I want to talk to you so I can say

It won’t go away

Won’t go away

 

I feel lost and pathetic

Bored and tired

I could make a list

But what I really want

Is to slit my wrists

 

I don’t understand

Why won’t it leave?

It’s been so long

But I can’t achieve

 

I want to die

I’m so tired of fighting

Tired of losing

I just want to go to heaven

Because you’ll be there

 

Let me go to heaven

I’m so tired

Just let me sleep

And never wake up


Submitted: April 15, 2012

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dravena

this is a powerful poem and reminds me of a hard time and feelings I have had, especially the lines" i want to talk to you so i can say it wont go away."You have really captured sadness very well in this poem .well done :)

Sun, April 15th, 2012 7:34pm

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Thank you, I was really upset when I wrote this poem but still didn't think I captured anything. I'm glad I did so thanks

Sun, April 15th, 2012 8:44pm

Brian W

Venting is good and writing your feelings down I think does help...It works for me...As a poem written while venting it is good...But you can rework it a little if you want to improve flow and make this great...Keep writing

Fri, May 4th, 2012 6:45am

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Thank you, I always think theres room for improvement and theres a bucket load of room with me lol, thanks for reading

Fri, May 4th, 2012 1:26am

Ian Dawn

Its not shit hun its you and thats all that counts and we are here for you. Never let yourself lose this life you have!

Tue, May 29th, 2012 7:27am

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Thanks man

Tue, May 29th, 2012 4:46am

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