I'll Share My Day With You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I will too!!

I’m having a really nice day

I hope you are too

If not, just say

And I’ll share my day with you


Submitted: July 21, 2015

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H. Adams

The positivity is just crazy good. Made me smile, which I bet you were aiming for. Nice and short and very to-the-point. Wonderful work, Melanie! Do keep me updated with when you post new poetry :)

Tue, July 21st, 2015 3:40am

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Thank you again so much! Yeah, I try to be a smile maker whenever I can! LOL! And I promise you I'll let you know when I post my next poem!!

Mon, July 20th, 2015 9:02pm

peacemaker06

Your friends and family sure are lucky to have you around Mel :) and after spending a day with you I bet they're on cloud nine ;) another great feel good poem filled with love and hope. Are you sure your human? Lol all power to you Mel ")

Tue, July 21st, 2015 6:05am

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Well, sometimes I drive my friends and family crazy so maybe they make it to cloud eight instead! LOL! I'm pretty sure I'm human. LOL! I do get mad and sad at times but I do always try to be positive. I once read a quote that it's not the negativity around you but how you react to it that counts. I think that's so true. Thank you so much for your positive attitude and comments.

Wed, July 22nd, 2015 7:26pm

LeParadisNoirPoetique

Just surreally beautiful Mel. In four short lines, you have turned a person's stormy day into sunshine of happiness. You are a gorgeous wonder, and your friends and family will be so blessed to have you in their lives. You deserve all the happiness you recieve back in return!

Tue, July 21st, 2015 4:26pm

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Thank you so much, that's so nice of you to say so! I do believe if you try to stay positive it will come back to you tenfold. You just proved that to be true with your sweet and positive response.

Wed, July 22nd, 2015 7:31pm

peacemaker06

I know it's hard not to feel sad in this world from time to time and your right, it's how you react to negativity that counts. I always try to find a positive from a negative too. And I know that you are only human but your positive aura does shine through and brighten the days of those around you and those not. If you ever need someone to talk to in your time of need don't hesitate to let me know. Just call my name and I'll be there ")

Thu, July 23rd, 2015 11:22am

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Again thank you so much for your own uplifting comments and thank you for your open offer to listen to my problems. You're so very sweet.

Thu, July 23rd, 2015 7:22pm

Ally Shark

This is short and sweet, and I like it! Simplicity is a wonderful thing. :)

Sun, July 26th, 2015 3:04am

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Thank you so much. Yeah, sometimes the best things come in small packages!

Wed, July 29th, 2015 12:46am

Jeff Bezaire

You must have a jar of happiness with you that you pop open when you write. This poem has such a nice sentiment.

Thu, July 30th, 2015 9:21pm

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LOL! That'd be so awesome if we all did have a jar of happiness wouldn't it!! Thanks again so much, Jeff!

Tue, August 4th, 2015 11:41pm

Tyrannos Senpai

Short, but well said.

Tue, December 15th, 2015 11:15pm

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Thanks!

Thu, December 17th, 2015 6:46pm

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