Poem by: melinda sue henry
Submitted: January 16, 2012
I fell with the stars
And rose with the moon
I shone with the sun
And hid with the clouds
I spun with the world
And sank with the waves
I rode with the wind
And danced with the rain
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Interesting Idea, and it works very well here. I like it. Thanks for sharing and keep on writing!
It sounds so pretty. Keep writing more ^^
heh thanks! You should put some stuff on booksie-i'd love to read them!
Very sweet..., loved it!
WOW! What a beautiful poem! Keep writing! :D
Thank you...I wish that I had time to put up my stories, but I'm always so busy with school and everything!:)
This was a very nice poem i can totally relate to it.
Thanks! I appreciate you reading it :)
This is beautiful, so simple yet so relate-able! :-)
VERY WELL SAID!!! Thumbs up. I dance and sing in the rain, sun, and snow.
haha thanks!!!!! and i dance everywhere, too...except the snow. yuck. lol ^__^
The several colors threw me off, but I really enjoyed the poem itself.
Thank you! And about the colors, that was my first poem on here and I was a little into putting colors into my stuff, and I never got tochanging it. ^__^
I like it! You should make it longer, for more combinations.
Thanks! And yea, if I come up with any more, I'll add them on!
Interesting. It shows how we can be different people at different times. I like the flow and the colors.
A rainbow of lines "dancing with the rain."
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