Poem by: melinda sue henry
Submitted: December 07, 2012
Some people have to learn that girls aren't dolls
They can't be played with, tossed to the side, and expected not to complain
© Copyright 2016 melinda sue henry. All rights reserved.
Short and sweet.
Thank you :)
Really good descriptions fearing a storm... Took me back to my childhood fears of them... I might suggest adding a bit more to it and bring out why she fears the storm because there usually is a reason why storms affect us the way they do.... Well done... Good luck in the contest..! Keep Smilin'... Jax
Lol well you kinda commented in the wrong poem XD just a guess here, but this was for "Her Storm"?
But thanks so much, and I'll look over it again!
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