A Message For You ...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: True Confessions  |  House: Booksie Classic

How else to say goodbye than in a meassage.

On the wall, a message to you.

I want you to remember me.

I want you to remember.

 

Written in red, vivid and vibrant,

I want you to remember then.

I want you to remember.

 

My masterpiece, crying my tears.

I want you to remember how.

I want you to remember.

 

Blood stained the walls, tainted its white.

I need you to remember me.

I need you to rememebr.


Submitted: April 24, 2012

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StrangeMind

Oh wow. I love this poem! It was fairly simple, but so well constructed and haunting that it doesn't seem it. I especially like how the repetition on the fourth line changed for the last stanza; making it more desperate and beautiful.
Great work, well done!

Tue, April 24th, 2012 3:28pm

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Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it,
Memories1995 xxx

Tue, April 24th, 2012 11:04am

inspiredbylove22

Agreed, simple but strong. I liked it :)

Thu, April 26th, 2012 6:16pm

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Thank you :) xx

Thu, April 26th, 2012 2:41pm

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