Fit for rivals

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Booksie Classic
Scott , Sarah and Edward are three close friends who will have some strange events in their lives

Submitted: November 21, 2010

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Submitted: November 21, 2010

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"Scott" , "Sarah" and "Edward" were about to begin their rob plan, this plan was about robbing two red-eye's members, red eye is a very big gang that deals with every kind of crime and specially in drugs, three friends wanted to steal this member because this member will have the money gained from his past deal, so they decided to make a plan to steal the money from these guys and their plan was swoop down the two guys who were taking the money to the gang base, well……. "Sarah" and "Scott" were sweethearts and they were about getting married and this was the last operation before the marriage and "Edward" was "Scott's" best friend, they have been grown up together and they know each other better than any one in this world, now the plan starts with little distraction from "Sarah", as she demanding a light for her cigarette from these guys while "Scott" and "Edward" waiting the right time to begin their attack, "Sarah" gave the signal then "Scott" with his gun and "Edward" with his shotgun started shooting the guy's car and they killed the two guys and took the money then got away from that place to the nearest garage to distribute the money before the police arrives, "Edward" decided to travel to Paris and live there forever and "Scott" and "Sarah" will live together, the spoil was 6 million dollar so every one will have 2 million but "Sarah" told "Scott" : hey dear!!

You shouldn't kill him at Miami and "Scott" fall into the ground dying, while "Sarah" and "Edward" ran away with the whole money leaving s

"Scott" in the garage, "Scott" was fainted not dead because the bullet was beside the heart and didn't make any critical damage to him, he was able to reach his mobile phone and call his young friend "Smith" , "Smith" is a very smart boy, "Scott" called him but he couldn't talk but "Smith" knew that he was in danger so he used the GPS to track "Scott" and he succeeded, then he took "Scott" to his house to treat him , after 6 months "Scott" was completely treated and began to search for his old love and his deceiver friend, "Smith" helped him to find his old love's new home and some information about her, she took 3 million dollar from the last operation then she bought new house but she was alone in this house, and she was addicted cocaine, "Scott" took the address from "Smith" and went to her place, when he arrived the pizza man was about leaving and when this man rang the bell she didn't come but the door was open so this man left the pizza on the ground, "Scott" took the pizza and entered the house, when her entered he was surprised when he found his photos all around the walls and he found "Sarah" laying on the ground, he get closer to her and this conversation took place….. "Scoot": you are pathetic/ "Sarah": hey don't you understand? I took cocaine to forget what I've done to you, no one took your place and there is no other, I still love you and I'll love you forever/ "Scott": just give me one reasonable reason for doing this to me? / "Sarah": first I want you to forgive me, and then do you remember what happened in Miami??

4 months ago

"Scott" and "Edward" went to Miami to have some money by selling 2 old guns to "Adams Green", this guy was very rich and he loved the old guns like these two, "Adams" was wiling to pay 1 million dollar each but he thought that this is too much for two guns and he wanted to kill "Scott" and in the other hand "Scott" and "Edward" didn’t want to sell the guns because they'll sell them to someone who will pay more but they want to have the money from "Adams" without giving him the guns , so they had a plan which was meeting this guy in an open garage and in the same time they will put explosions in the cars at the side of that guy and "Edward" will stay at the highest building with his sniper to hunt any one alive after the explosions, but "Adam's" plan wasn't that good so he planed when he have the guns , his men will kill "Scott", the exchange time has arrive and "Adams": here is you money, give me the guns/ "Scott": you know what? I know that you will kill me after taking the guns so let me see the money first at this time "Scott" gave the signal to "Edward" then the explosions took place then "Scott" took his gun and ran to the briefcase to take it at the same time "Edward" hunts anyone stand

At the end everyone is dead and "Scott" took the money and ran away with "Edward".

"Scott" : yeah I remember / "Sarah": well the man you killed "Adams green" is the son of the red-eye gang boss, Mr. Green asked "Edward" to kill you and he will have a chance to work with him in return, he thought that he will have a great life so he accepted then he told me to join him and the only reason that makes me accept is I was afraid he could kill you so I told him that I'll shoot you and I wanted just to wound you and also he told me if I didn't join him he'll kill you and me , so I took the risk and from that time I was waiting you to come again and here you are / "Scott": ooh god all of this happened because of a thing I never did!! Anyway I want to talk to "Edward" but first I want your help with some money to buy new guns ***

Well "Sarah" knew "Edward's" apartment so "Scott" went alone to him, when the servant opened he told her that he's someone from the work, when "Edward" saw "Scott" he panicked but "Scott" had a gun, so "Edward" was so still with no move and this conversation happened "Edward": how could it be ? I know that dead people never walks again? / "Scott": that if I was dead, well old friend I want my money back / "Edward": sorry dude, I don't have any money, the gang take care of everything in my life and I don't have to bay anything, but I could tell Anderson to give you your money /"Scott": Anderson who? / "Edward": he is the second man to "Green", look this is his address go to him and tell him what you want but be careful his house is full of explosions, he put them for anything could happen so he can remove the evidence and he love the lovely chicks a lot / "Scott": why did you do that to me ? "Sarah" told me everything / "Edward": "Sarah" …. Well I know that you were better than me, your mind gave us all what we need, it was all about you, you are the leader and I'm the servant why? And when I got the chance to take control and remove you from my life, I took it, and I was expecting a life with no pain and I'll live the best days in my life / "Scott": when "Sarah" shoot me you had the chance to kill her, why you didn't do that?/ "Edward": I enjoyed seeing her suffering without you and seeing her full of drugs/"Scott": I always treated you like a brother of mine but you don't deserve that and I'm afraid that you will deceive me again, so you don't have to be alive

Then "Scott" took "Anderson" address and willing to go to him.

"Anderson" is a man who loves to have a new chick every night, a new girl called "Amy" was outdoor waiting "Anderson" to let her in, when she entered "Anderson" wanted her on the bed immediately but she refused, she wanted to have wine first, so "Anderson" called the waiter to bring wine in the room, as soon as the waiter entered "Amy" and the waiter raised guns in "Anderson's" face telling him that…… "Sarah": sorry Mr., I'm not cheep girl as you want / "Scott": I want my money back please / "Anderson": who are you? / "Scott": I'm "Scott Thompson, the man who killed "Edward" / "Anderson": yeah, the man who killed "Adams"/ "Scoot": wasn't ..... Anyway where's my money? / "Anderson": let me call Mr." Green" and ask him / "Scoot": ok but first give me your explosions remote and show me where you hide these explosions "Green": hey Anderson, speak / "Scott": sorry sir I'm the man who killed your son but I want my money back / "Green": what ?? Your money? And how are you alive now?

You will be dead soon you hear me? / "Scott": look, give me my money or I'll make Anderson say hello to your son in hell / "Green": this is my money and you will never take a cent from it /"Scoot": so this is a no <"Scott" shot "Anderson" in the head> "Green": ANDERSON!!! You'll bay for it "Scott", you'll never have a second happy in your life you hear me?!?!?!

Now "Scott" know that "Green" will spread his men all over the city so he'll act fast, before killing "Anderson", "Scott" knew that "Green" has another son called "Allen" and he love 2 things cars and wrestling, so "Scott" rented a Ferrari car and went to a pay per view wrestling match, and he parked his Ferrari beside "Allen's" car and waited for him, after the match is over, "Allen" left his friends and went to his car alone, so he saw the Ferrari

"Allen": awesome car dude!! / "Scott": wanna try it?

Then scoot kidnapped "Allen" then he put him in a new apartment which he rented, and left him with "Sarah", then "Scott" called "Green" and asked him for giving him his money and they determined a place to exchange, "Green": here's your money 3 million dollars like "Edward" / "Scott": one million more!! Great / "Green": you will not have this money before seeing my son / "Scott": well if I told you his place now, these two guys standing behind you will kill me then your other guys will start searching for him, so when I have my money and go away from you I'll call you and tell you where he is / "Green": are you kidding? Get him and make him confess faster …. The two guys took scoot and started punch him and kick him till he told them the place where the kid is hidden, so "Green" took his men and went to the place, while they were in their way to the kid, "Scott" made a call to "Sarah" and told her to meet him in the road, "Green" went to the house and found the kid, "Scott" is now with "Sarah" in her car and he is calling "Green"……"Scott": hey "Green" / "Green": "Scott"!! You're lucky I found my boy and we forgot the money at the place but I promise you'll never live to enjoy these money/ "Scott": look up

"Sarah": what should we do now? / "Scoot": we have 3 millions, so we will travel to Spain and have a new great live there forever.


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