Love's Arithmetic

another great chapter :D

poor Garrett :( well, at least he's trying to be nice :) i can't wait to see what she says

haha, i love the way she thinks :D she's so.... blonde, i guess is the word :)

i know this was posted a couple of years ago, but i am going to read it and comment on every chapter :D just cuz it's fun and this novel is amazing!
anywho, i think i like garrett. i know he's the bad guy, and all, but i have an inkling that he's gonna turn out all right in the end- at least i hope so. if he doesn't i wil cry. probably not really, but you get the picture. off to read the next chapter!

"We're not characters of a book" how funny =) I was actually thinking about something like that a couple of days ago for a story...
Aww sweet ending. Very realistic. Loved it ;D
Looking forward to reading the sequel!!!

Aww! It's so sad! Sounds almost like an ending!
You scared me there for a moment! I thought Caer actually died. and when you were talking about the gunshot, I thought Toby sbot Garrett but really, Brian shot Toby (phew!)

So intense! I have an exam tomorrow but at 130 so i think i might keep reading tonight...

Garrett must be dying on the inside at this moment. Omg! So much suspense! And I'm nearing the end! :o

I totally would've voted for you if I hadn't been so late!
Ooooh! and now the roles are reversed!
Wouldn't it suck if Toby barged in at that moment?

Their relationship is so cute =)
Ugh. I just tried to do the hands under butt while handcuffed thing (just holding hands). I can do it if I just hold my hands but I can't do it while holding my wrists... Either my arms are too short or my butt's too big... how awkward..

Aww you!!!
They didn't kiss! "The bacon's going to burn" Oh my god...
Btw, I know part of what makes a good novel now... lots of twists and turns and the author needs a good imagination and memory.
I was watching HP 1 and Ron said that his brother was a dragon keeper person and I thought "Oh my gosh! That's important in the 4th movie!" If I were writing a series, I would not have preplanned that much!

Ah! It ended on an almost kiss!!! Aw you're such a tease!!!!
aaaaand I loved the image of her flapping her arns even thougb she had hand cuffs on. Lol ;)

I think I may have noticed a SLIGHT pattern in your chapters =) At the beginning of a chapter, it's sweet and romantic. Then, there's a twist and the ending's very... shocking and slightly scary. Then, in the next chapter, the opposite. Which is why your story keeps all your readers on the edge of their seats =)
Oh em gee! I was so right about Toby! But I wonder why...

CLIFFHANGER! Why?!?!?!?!?!?!
I don't think I should read on... It's 9pm. I need to study for my exam which is in 12 hours (omg!) and I should fit some sleep in there. So... I shall read on another day.
YAY! Garret's back!
And I had, like, a smile on my face when you were talking about Caer cutting cumbers (oh look, alliteration). So funny ;)

GASP! They just kissed!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I can't believe he just dumped her back in her apartment! Wait a minute... How could he have known where she lived? o.O? Maybe you'll answer that next chapter...

Erm... I don't know how much 93 degrees is ;) I work in celcius. Hahah I'll have to go convert it ;D
Oh. 33.8. That's not good. Normal body temperature is, I think, 37 degrees celcius.
Nooo!!! Hypothermia?!?!? Save her, Garret! Save her!!!

OH EM GEEEEEE!!! I was right! But now I'm clueless as to what will happen.
Aww he knows he loves her!!! AWWW! I'm, like, melting... Even though the story is very cold at the moment (with all the rain and stuff).

Aww!!! She's alone in the storm!!!
Okay, if I'm wrong, this will be funny but if I'm right...
So, I think that Garret will go "Oh noes! She's gone! And look! There's a storm! This girl's afraid of storms! I love her so much! I must protect her!!!" and tada hero!
But I must read on to see what happens ;)

Oooh... the plot has seemed to speed up a little! But I'm only half-way through all the chapters! Read on. Read on!!!

GASP! He found out!!! What's going to happen?!?!?!!?!? Hehehe I'll read on =)