Your Place In My Heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

A melancholy poem about a boy I used to love...

 

Your Place in My Heart
 
In my heart there is a place,
Where your picture sits beside a vase.
Cracked, tattered, and torn,
Frame and photo look forlorn.
 
But once upon a time,
Your words built every line.
The lines on the wall are bare and sparse,
Not continuing on their course.
 
Cracked, tattered and torn it may be,
And it’s power’s kept me from being free.
The strong and fatal pull,
Of love’s tragic emotional lull.
 
The hardest part is knowing,
That I’ll never see you smiling.
But the funny thing is,
I can’t quite remember that smile of his.


Submitted: April 02, 2012

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Insane Membrane

sweet and sad .... and I had a vase once :-) N1

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 9:12am

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Thank you! :D I appreciate your comment!

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 2:26am

beingyash

tests, some are meant to pass, some, to fail, and some other are for endurance purposes, to make you tougher, used to it, for life carries on creating new wounds to bear and healing the old ones with times, but i know one thing and you might also too, some wounds never heal, and even worse are those which get healed but leave the scars so as whenever your gaze falls upon them, it grows greener, and the worst, it hurts..

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 9:51am

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Very wise.

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 12:22pm

Joseph Owl

Wow you really love fairy tales do you. But this poems is really really beautiful. Where do you get all these good ideas? :D

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 1:13pm

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Haha! Yes I do! Thank you so much! I don't have enough room in this thingy to tell you! :D

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 12:24pm

RyansGirlFOREVER1993

I love it! very emotional, very breathtaking!

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 2:27pm

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Thanks! That really means a lot!

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 12:25pm

Melissa Alburney

That was beautiful Mer, I absolutely loved it :)
~Lissa

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 4:07pm

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Meli! thanks so much! :D

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 12:26pm

nighthawk

bitter sweet piece of work.i like it.

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 6:08pm

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Thank you!

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 12:26pm

KityMiny

I love this poem definitly descrebes the feeling i have...:) Nice job.. by the way can you check out my novel called The Fate of two.. thanks :) There are already four chapter wiriten.. :)

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 9:13pm

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thanks for your compliment.

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 2:25pm

D0ntFeedTheM0dels

Oh my gosh. This is amazing, Dee!! I love this to bits and pieces, I really really do :D! You're such a good poet, and did you even know it ;P?? Anywho, this is lovely.

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 10:29pm

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You're a doll! Thanks so much! Hahaha! Guess you're a poet too! :D

Mon, April 2nd, 2012 4:20pm

Cherry Iceglow

Beautiful, well done I like it

Thu, April 5th, 2012 9:02pm

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Thanks! :)

Thu, April 5th, 2012 2:22pm

saphirerose

Unique and meaningful. I especially love the the last stanza... I can relate well to a lot in this poem :)

Thu, April 19th, 2012 1:54am

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thanks so much! I'm glad you can relate! ?

Wed, April 18th, 2012 7:21pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

And then sometimes, they come back to haunt you day and night.

Sat, April 21st, 2012 3:10am

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Indeed they do.

Fri, April 20th, 2012 9:21pm

AshleyRose

It's really good April 30th is the start of the voting day. I've made already made a cover for you, hope you like it.
Wishing you luck, AshleyRose

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 6:24am

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Thanks so much! Awesome! I'll check it out! ?

Sun, April 22nd, 2012 1:24am

LayoutMaker

Just voted for you!
I think this isn't your BEST poem but it's certainly really good! It reminds me of a song I once heard (okay, not once. I sung it in choir) and it was really nice =)
"In every heart there is a room. A sanctuary safe and sound." < 3

Fri, May 18th, 2012 7:30am

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Thanks! Yeah, well, it was written just for this contest! Thanks for voting though! I will have to look up that song!

Fri, May 18th, 2012 1:11am

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