Chamber In Hell

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chamber in hell.


I tore my heart out so you could hear my screams,

But, all of you fools think it's a dream,

All you people making me think I'm insane,

Watching and staring at my blood drain,

They think they can keep me here forever,

They can't keep me in this chamber, I'll find a way out whenever,

This cell is dark,

I can hear the pounding of my heart,

Please, oh just please, get me out of here,

But, what they will do to me is what I fear,

I scream to the top of my lungs as the pain burns,

My face turns,

From pale to blue,

But, they should see how I feel from my point of veiw,

All I hear are the rattling of chains,

And, the sound of all the tearful pains,

They don't know me I'm not a puppet that you can control

But, I'm taking a stand and destroy this hell hole

Submitted: January 07, 2011

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Ah-mazing!!! I can see the images in my head and when a writer can make me do that, i know they are really good! :)

Mon, January 31st, 2011 7:06pm


Hahhaa, I feel amaazinnng now.
You just made my day, kiddo. :)

Tue, February 1st, 2011 2:06pm


i'm in the same hell. but soon i'll beable to break free. good piece of writing.

Sun, March 20th, 2011 11:14am


We are both in hell. /: thanks. :)

Sun, March 20th, 2011 12:37pm

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