My fears are becomming my dreams

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

my fears are becomming my dreams.

My fears are becoming my dreams

I sat by your bedside day and night,

Scared this may be your last and only fight,

Seeing you suffer made me fear my worst,

Can't help but feeling that my life has been cursed,

I saw the tears in your eyes telling you please don't cry,

I realized that this may be your last and final goodbye,

The pain filled my heart with sorrow,

Scared I may not see you tomorrow,

I sit and wait for answers to arrive,

 Fearing you may not be alive,

Realizing you won't be here much longer,

Knowing that all these people are getting stronger,

While I'm getting weaker as the pain increases.

Mawmaw, I love you.

Submitted: December 31, 2010

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Very Nice. Its a lovely piece of writing. Its also chilling but it tells the Truth

Fri, December 31st, 2010 6:10pm


Thank you very much, I do try my hardest at my work. Thank you sooo much.

Fri, December 31st, 2010 12:18pm


Aww. This isn't true is it? If it is then i am truly sorry. Otherwise i really love and i almost feel like crying. LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!

Mon, January 31st, 2011 7:09pm


Yes, it is true, my grandmother was dying and I had no other way to ge it out, so I chose poetry.

Tue, February 1st, 2011 2:04pm


good, dealtailed emotion. keep it up

Sun, March 20th, 2011 11:07am


:) thanks.

Sun, March 20th, 2011 12:39pm

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