Poem by: meriddle
Submitted: January 09, 2012
By M. E. Riddle
A child close by
Playing in the grass with friends
Rejoicing in youth.
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What you have here is a lune. Haikus are an interesting beast, I recall some saying that "Great haikus tell 80 percent of the story, but we cannot get enough of ones that only show 50," or something along those lines.
Interesting descriptive choice, a 'lune'. Thanks. (I think). If you like that Haiku, read others I've written. 'Haiku's of Life', 'Haiku Rev 1', 'Haiku Rev 3'. In the meantime, I'll check out some of your work.
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