Experimenting On Nobodys

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

I know it's shoprt, and kinda gory, but these are the klinda poems I write, though I don't know why. I can try to write other less...."graphic" ones, love poems to be exact, but they don't always turn out that great. I'll need COMMENT to publish those, so feel free to comment away...

please please me. (brownie points if you get that)

Pioson, weapons, fun all around.
When I cut you, you won't make a sound.
Skin peeled back from flesh soo pale.
You choke and cough, blood splurts like hail.
Funny, colourful, badly bruised shins.
Crimson liquid fills large bins.
Now it's time to end this life,
to wash away your tears and strife.
So fight all you want, pretty young one.
But just remember that your life is done.

Submitted: July 14, 2010

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I like it, lots of images. It lets the imagination take it in different ways for different people, which is something a good writer needs to master. :)

Wed, July 14th, 2010 9:42pm


Man, this is awesome! I like how gorey and graphic it is, it has good detail! It paints a very colorful picture. I like that. :-)

Sun, July 18th, 2010 5:19pm


Oh, thanks. (I would've replyed tio your message sooner, but it's taking me a while to master this site. I'm totally new to it, so I didn't know how to reply to these comments.) I think it's one of my best =D.

Mon, July 19th, 2010 10:06am

Zombie Bunny

HOLY CRAP. O.o Is this the poem you were talking about? That's so weird! What in the world...they're so similar! I can't believe it. Can I just say that I swear to God it's coincidence? Because if I were you, I would totally be accusing me of grand theft poetry right now. XD But really...I hate people who do that. Wow...this is weird. It looks familiar, too, but I can't tell if it's because I've read it or because it reminds me of mine. Wow. Amazing, indeed.

Sat, March 12th, 2011 2:37am


Yeah, I know right! I was wondering about that, but maybe you've read it before and when you wrote yours it just sort of blended? I'm not sure =S I don't accusing people of anything really. Let's just say we have shockingly similar brain waves.

Sat, March 12th, 2011 3:28am

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