This is an entry to PurpleSkittles145's 3 round contest!!! It's about the picture of the converse and the camera ~xoxo

My camera is held steady,
Poised at the oak tree,
And I see things,
Things meant for me.
 
The sun shines through the leaves,
It sends buttery sparks,
All I see are faeries,
On their journeys they embark.
 
A clump of trees stand together,
Protecting something,
I see it is a monster,
But really, it is nothing.
 
The late autumn leaves scatter the ground,
Elves jump around underneath,
But you cannot feel it,
When they nip you with their teeth.
 
My world is not like yours,
With your hurt and pain,
Mine is filled with happiness,
Laughter, joy and gain.
But once the camera is put down,
And the disappointing life sets in,
I trundle back home, camera hanging weakly,
I will come back to my world again.


Submitted: May 22, 2011

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skater505

This is awesome! I like how it has aspects of fantasy in it too!! :)

Sun, May 22nd, 2011 6:06pm

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:) thank you!!! ~xoxo

Sun, May 22nd, 2011 11:45am

PurpleSkittles145

This is a great poem! It has a meaning, and i liked that you didn't just state it (like: whenever i hold up my camera i see a new world) You made us think:D and i like that (i hope i'm not confusing you)You used creative words to give us "hints" to what the meaning is!!!

Sun, May 22nd, 2011 6:16pm

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Thanks :) Good luck wth your other entries too!! ~xoxo

Sun, May 22nd, 2011 11:44am

Messy98

Oh and I see you found it okay?? :) ~xoxo

Sun, May 22nd, 2011 6:51pm

PurpleSkittles145

oh ya i did find it lol..at first i couldn't see it:D

Tue, May 24th, 2011 11:19pm

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Haha :) Thats goood!! ~xoxo

Wed, May 25th, 2011 9:01am

Kay Browne

This was great! :) Your very talented!

Fri, May 27th, 2011 8:46pm

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Thanks!! :) :) ~xoxo

Sat, May 28th, 2011 1:18am

fresh spirits

Lovely talented poem.

Thu, June 9th, 2011 9:39pm

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Thank you! :) ~xoxo

Fri, June 10th, 2011 12:42pm

unknown girl

this was sooooo cool :)
I love how you explained what you wanted to tell and made it rhyme too!
I love it

Mon, June 13th, 2011 8:44pm

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:) thankss ~xoxo

Tue, June 14th, 2011 9:58am

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