Not reall my thing, romance, but this is for my darling Haylie. I love you.


Ours is a love that won't be bound

It rests in the dust and underground

Ours is a truth no truth has spoken

Ours is a bond, neither strong or incomplete

Loves faithful angels

Sing devils to their sleep.

To hold a dignity so solid

Yours is a coat that never turns

You'll be the moonlit Berlin air

The whisper I thought I heard

You're the candle to light the stairs

To be solemnly spoken

Take the splinters from my hand

To be a twilight broken

To the ethers overhead

Ours is the daylight dying, where the dawn completes the dusk

Ours is the sacred and chase,

Chrysthanthemum and musk

Be the garden, shrouded mystery

And ours will be unspoken

Ours will be the promise,

Yet unbroken.

Submitted: May 12, 2007

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Beautiful..just like Dawn, wonderful work Meth:)

Sat, May 12th, 2007 2:26am


Aww, thankyou. She hasn't read it yet, grrr!

Sat, May 12th, 2007 3:55pm

Saturday Night

You've got a style all your own and this is a very powerful piece. I'm honored to know I had a small part in moving you to write this fantastic testament to your love. SN

Sun, May 13th, 2007 4:31am


Aww, thanks SN, appreciate the support.

Sun, May 13th, 2007 2:49pm


Beautiful work here. Deeply moving and heartfelt. Brilliantly constructed. 5/5!!!!! Dmonik

Sun, May 13th, 2007 9:14pm


Thankyou, glad you liked it. I had some good inspiration!

Sun, May 13th, 2007 2:48pm


This is the first poem that I've commented on...but I just had to. This poem captures the meaning...I love it. Well written...well spoken.

Wed, May 16th, 2007 5:44am


Wow, thankyou! I'm glad it moved you to express your opinion, it was partly inspired by anothe poet on this site call 'Saturday Night' and of course inspired by my love. Thanks again!

Wed, May 16th, 2007 5:16pm

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