When will I stop?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Love poem..

When Will I stop loving you?

When Will I stop adoring you?

When the wind no longer blows,

When the sun it's face no longer shows.

When the stars no longer cover the night sky,

When the great oceans become dry.

When A love song no longer brings memories,

When A heart no longer has arteries.

When the winters no longer brings snow,

When my life to GOD I no longer owe.

When gravity is no longer a force,

When nature its laws fails to enforce.

I will love you until the end of time,

Until my poems no longer have meaning and rhyme.


Submitted: April 01, 2011

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Frank Ramtahal

At most you outlined all that should happen before you stop loving and adorning the person. I like your rhyming.

It would have be better if you mentioned in the introduction what the poem is about, not just love poem; perhaps love poem about a boy or about a girl. As it is the poem is about you.

Fri, April 1st, 2011 1:33pm

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Well I didn't think it needed much explanation. It's not like I'm telling a story or anything of that matter. But, you are entitled to your opinion.

Fri, April 1st, 2011 6:54am

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SarahWN92

This is kind of bittersweet. I like it, it's honest and simple. Even though you kept it simple, it has a great meaning about how to love behind it (I think) or that's how I see it! :D

I love it! When you have a new poem, can you keep me updated on it?

Thank you!

Sat, April 2nd, 2011 4:18am

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Yeah, I like to keep my poems simple. I've read some that are really complicated and don't make sense so I like to keep my work simple.. Thanks for the comment and I'll try to keep you updated

Sat, April 2nd, 2011 3:01am

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lunaperra

Well your poems in English are just as good as the ones in Spanish...but the Spanish ones tug at the heart strings more for me. I guess it's the latin pull - can't fight it lol

Mon, April 4th, 2011 4:59pm

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haha.. yeah I know what you mean.. So your latina? Where from?

Mon, April 4th, 2011 10:04am

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