A Smoker

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem about me "criticizing" smokers, even hough I am one. It's kinda a reality type poem.

I reach out

For your attention-

Yellow card.

Smoke dripping yellow

Down the white wall-


So full of harm.


You inclose


In a white- walled room,

Perfect for the insane.


Puffing on that cigarette,

You're the only one

To blame.


A death trap,

Like a fixed blade.

Heading towards your lungs,


Yet you don't keep them clean


Slowly the whole room


To a sour yellow tone.

Imagine your insides-

Blood clotting,

Lungs shriveling,

Teeth rotting.

A smoker-

You'll die alone.

Submitted: October 19, 2011

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You poem disgusts me, in a good way! Funny, I never imagined myself ever saying that sentence. Anyway, I like it a lot. It brings back memories of people long gone from such behavior.

Thu, October 20th, 2011 2:44am


I'm glad that my poem brought back some memories. Thanks for reading it!

Thu, October 20th, 2011 3:45pm

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oh so well written, excellent, right on the target!! GREAT DETAILS, SMOKING KILLS SLOWLY! Like it a lot, you're goooood.

Thu, October 20th, 2011 1:16pm


Hahah thank you :)

Thu, October 20th, 2011 3:44pm

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