Blind (10/20/2015)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


I’ve tried to tell you

But you won’t hear

I’ve been screaming

In silent fear

My wrists are speaking

Unspoken words

My heart is screaming

Am I cursed?

I love you so

Can’t you see?

When you hurt yourself

You’re hurting me

Our hearts, my love

Are intertwined

Yours is dying

And so is mine

I’ve tried to tell you

To let you know

That you think I’m okay

But it isn’t so

I’m bleeding, love

Dying, crying

My guardian angels

They’ve stopped trying

I’m slipping away

But you won’t see

That by hurting yourself

You’re killing me

I smile, I laugh

But I’ve told you before

That no matter the mask

I’m always at war

Always fighting

The demons in my head

But I’ve come to realize

I’m already dead

I’ve been fighting so long

To stay alive

Been trying so hard

Just to survive

But in seventeen years

My heart never beat

Not once, not a whisper

No hope for me

Submitted: October 20, 2015

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What an emotional poem! Very well done, I hope to read more of your work :)

Tue, October 20th, 2015 7:36pm


Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Tue, October 20th, 2015 11:54pm

unknown knives

"No matter the mask, i'm always at war..." Have a go at Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock by TS Elliot (Face to meet the faces you will meet). Loved this...

Fri, October 23rd, 2015 11:47pm


Thank you, I appreciate that, and I'll look that up right now :)

Fri, October 23rd, 2015 9:25pm

teen nobody

Amazing poem, so well writen and so emotional! Great piece, I'll definitely keep updated with your work.

Mon, October 26th, 2015 6:17pm


Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it so much :)

Tue, October 27th, 2015 9:30pm

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