Bang, Bang (or thinking about calling "The last Dance")

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Umm this one the first stories i wrote at school got me top marks for it..
I really like it.. its abit hard to tell you a little bit about it.. more you got to read it... but i love it..

Submitted: July 14, 2008

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Submitted: July 14, 2008

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“BANG, BANG”
 
1 day ago…
“Hey!” Will yelled at me as he hugged me.
“Hi”, I said.
“So, how are you?” he asked me.
“I’m ok, what about you? I didn’t think you’d be this happy”
“Well, it’s ok, but it still hurts”,
“Well, it taught you a lesson”,
“Shut up! I know!” he said.
“So what happened anyway?” I asked him.
“Look the bus is coming!” he said.
We climbed on to the bus and put are tickets in.
“Okay, I was skating and trying to grind this pole but the skateboard slipped out under me and I fell snapping my board in half”,
We sat down at the back the bus.
“Oh my god, Will your silly some times!”
“I’m so glad it is the last day”, he said.
“Yeah I know”,
 
Will was about 5’6 feet tall, with longish black hair and with crystal blue eyes with a hint of sea green. Will and I been best friends since we were really young.
 Just then Krystal got on the bus and walked up to Will.
“Hello baby”, she said.
“Hi”,
Okay, Krystal is one those girly-girly, the really popular ones. Who thinks she owns the whole world. She has this major crush on Will but he hates her. She always tries to hook up with him.
“So, what are you doing to night?” Krystal asked him.
“Well, nothing with you” he said to her.
“Oh come on, you are going to the thingy after school right?”
“Yes, I am”,
“And don’t you need a date”,
“Yeah, I guess so”, Will replied.
“So..?”
Will turned around and looked at me.
“Naomi?”
“Yes?” I said.
“Will you come with me tonight?” Will asked me.
“Like a date?”
“Yeah”,
I looked at Krystal she looked so upset and shocked. Just to upset her I am going to say yes. I put my arms around him.
“I thought you never ask!” I said with this big smile on my face.
“Sweet, I’ll pick you up at six”,
“Thanks” I said. -
I looked at Krystal. She started to cry and ran to the front of the bus. I felt bad then but some what not really bad.
“Did you just ask me to upset her?”
Will didn’t look at me.
“No. I mean yes!”
“What one?” I asked him
He looked at me. He was bright red.
“I… love you”
No one had ever said that to me. Thousands of emotions are running through my head. I didn’t know what to say.
“You don’t need to say anything you know that right?” he said to me
“I...its just”
Nothing would come out. NOTHING! My mouth just moved but nothing not a word nada, zero, nothing, zip came out.
“Hey, just let me pick you up tonight and we see how things go”
“Okay”
I sat there and looked out the window and saw our stop coming so I pressed the buzzer and we got off. We just walked we didn’t talk. We got to the school gates.
“I love you too” I said
I walked off. He was just standing there, looking at me walking off. Then his mates walked up to him and started to pat him on the back.
“Sup bro?” I heard someone say.
I walked to my class room were I saw Flory. She was talking to Starr.
“Hello peps” I said
They jumped.
“NAOMI!”
Flory came running at me. I just moved and she went flying. We started laughing.
“Hey! That’s not funny” said Flory
“You won’t guess what” I said
“What, what?” Starr asked
“I got a date! For to night”
“Oh my god! Who?” Starr yelled
“Will” I said
I sat down on the desk and looked at the window.
“Oh la la” said Flory
“Mmm” I said
“Well, now we all got dates” Starr said
“YEAH!!” Flory screamed
“Flory’s got Adam, Starr you got Alex and me and Will” I said
“Sounds sweet” Starr said
Then the bell rang and every one started to come in.
“Our secret?” I asked them
“Yeah” they said
We did our hand shake and sat down. The teacher walked in but it wasn’t our normal teacher.
“Hello class, I’m Mr Spurling”
He had this odd look, like he was up to some thing. He was about 50 years old and he had red hair and faded blue eyes. He was wearing such ugly clothing like old pants to his hips and an old daggy yellow top.
“Why have we got you?” Billy asked him
“I don't know much I just got called in” he said
I leant in to Starr.
“Well he is an odd one” I said.
“Yeah, I know” she said back.
“What a funny looking one too” Flory said
Just then Will and his mates walked in. Will is in a group of 4 there is Alex,Jamie and Adam.These guys are called “The School hotties”.
Alex- Tall about 5''7 feet, With sweet light sea green eyes and with his perfect hair, Short Black with tip of light brown hair. See what i mean?
Jamie- Tall again, well their all tall But Jamie taller he is about 5''8 feet now with his Perfect deep sea blue eyes and his light blonde hair (natural i might add) with no hint of brown just pure yellow.
Adam- Flory's favourite hottie. he is about 5''7 feet with short black hair and a soft light brown eyes with a hint of green and this huge White smile.
We where sitting at a desk of 6. Alex sat in front of Starr and Adam in front of Flory and well you can guess what, next will sat in front of me. Jamie being the odd one grabbed a chair and just sat next to Alex.
“You young man” The teacher said pointing at Jamie.
“Yeah?” he said.
“You are late, Jamie”'
“OH Mr. S long time, no see” he said
“Yes Jamie, it has been a long time you still own me home work” he said smiling
“Shit”
We all laughed.
“Shut up” he said.
The day went pretty slow after that. I just wanted it to hurry up so we could go on our date.
 
Lunch time-
Starr, Flory and I went out side.
“The fresh air” Starr said
“Isn't it great?” asked Flory.
“You know what will be better?” I asked them.
“What?” Starr asked?
“Tonight” I said.
“I know, how great it will be” Flory said
Just then Will and co just walked up to us.
“Hey” they said.
“How weird is that new teacher” said Adam.
“He seems like he is up to some thing” Starr said.
“Mr.s? ha ha no way!” Jamie said.
We left it at that.
 
After School
I was waiting at the school gate for Flory and Starr. They are taking for ever. About 10 mins later I got fed up and just walked off. I started to walk off when I saw Mr.Spurling packing something in to his car. I couldn’t quite make out what it was. I thought be best to just leave it so I walked off. I caught the bus home it was very quite no one was really on it. When I got off it wasn’t much a walk home. I grab my keys and open the door.
“Hello honey” my mum said
She was in the kitchen cooking.
“Hi” I yelled back at her
“How was your day?”
“Not to bad, I got a date for tonight” I said as I started to climb the stairs. 
“OH really and who would this boy be?”
“Will mother” I said I was up the top the stairs.
“Really? How cute. You better get ready or you’ll be late”
“I am,”
I Went to my room and hopped into the shower. It was just then I remembered that I probably should have got a towel. I finished having a shower. The good thing is that I have a shower in my room. It being my room I just thought there be no one in my room but when I opened the door to my shock there sitting on my bed happened to Will and he happened to look at me and out of all things I was naked.
“Ahhh I’ll just get going then. I’ll be waiting down stairs” he said and walked out.
I was kind of feeling really weird. I don’t what to say maybe I should get dress I thought. I walked over to my cupboard and pulled out a dress I had. It was a boob tube like top and very wavy button and it was a light chocolate brown colour with a big belt. I also put on my brown high hells. I straightened my hair.
I still can’t believe that he walked in on me. I felt weird it the first time some one have ever walked in on me like that. I went down and when I was walking down they both looked at me. Will looked really good. He was really nicely dressed that I nearly feel down the stairs he looked that good.
“Hey, I’m really sorry about before, really sorry” he said to me
“Ha, ha it’s okay” I said.
“You look really nice”
“I could say the same thing about you”
“Awww you guys are so cute, I want to take a picture” my mum said.
“MUM!” I said.
“Hey, it’s all good” Will said
My mum took the picture.
“Okay, we’re going now” I said
“Okay, I see you soon, love you” She said
I went up to her kissed her and grabbed Will’s hand and walked out the door.
“Thank god, that’s over” I Said
“Ha, ha it wasn’t that bad” He said
“Mmmm” I said
“Shall we get going?” he asked
“Sure, why not” I said
We started to walk, he started to hold my hand and I just smiled. We are going to “Bang Bang”. We do this every year. It’s like a mini club but with out beer and stuff. We finally got there. There where a lot people waiting out there in line and the body guarded at the front (his name is Tom) was just standing there not letting any one in.
“Tom, baby how are you” I said
“Ah Naomi, come right in” he said with big smile on his face.
“Why thank you tom”
“Is he with you?” he looked at Will
“Yep he is” I said
“Lucky him, have a nice time, by the way you look hot” he said
“Thanks, Tommo” I said
We walked in. We saw Flory and co, we walked up to them and we all started to dance. The band was our own it was the “Hilltop Hoods” then next it was “Bang Bang” that’s why the club is called “Bang Bang”.
When the stoped playing “The hard Road”. We all went up to get drinks.
“Well, are you having fun?” I asked Starr and Flory.
“Great, this is so much fun” Flory said.
“Yeah I know what you mean” Starr yelled.
“Great” I said
Flory looked at Starr.
“Come to the toilet with me please?” she asked her
“Sure!” she said and they walked off.
I stood there and just waited for the boys to get back.
Flory and Starr went in to the toilet, the herd Krystal voice and run in to a toilet cube and started to listen what she was saying.
“Hey that Naomi girl is going to pay for what she did ha, ha!!!” she said to some one.
“What would you like me to do?” said a mans voice
They did hear the rest of the conversation because they left.
 “”OH MY GOD!!” Starr yelled.
“I know, what could they do?” Flory asked
“We should tell her”
“I know, let’s go find her” They left and went out trying to find her.
 
“Hey sexy” Will said as he walked up to me
“Hey” I said
“Let’s dance”
“Sure, I loved to” I said
He took me out to the dance floor. The Hills were off and now “Bang Bang” was on.
There were lots off people on and we just danced.
“Naomi!” Flory yelled
“Where is she?” Starr said
“Naomi!”
Will put his arms around me, then he smiled and winked. I wasn’t sure if he winked at me or some one behind me and then I turned around.
“BANG, BANG!” They sang.
I hit the floor, just then Krystal walked up to Will and hugged him.
“Pity, she was kind of cute” she said
I felt sick really bad, the pain. Just then Flory and Starr ran up to me. Flory got her phone out and called someone. Then the last thing I remember is Krystal pashing Will right front of me then every thing went black.
 
The end
By Keshia Kimber.
“BANG, BANG”
 
1 day ago…
“Hey!” Will yelled at me as he hugged me.
“Hi”, I said.
“So, how are you?” he asked me.
“I’m ok, what about you? I didn’t think you’d be this happy”
“Well, it’s ok, but it still hurts”,
“Well, it taught you a lesson”,
“Shut up! I know!” he said.
“So what happened anyway?” I asked him.
“Look the bus is coming!” he said.
We climbed on to the bus and put are tickets in.
“Okay, I was skating and trying to grind this pole but the skateboard slipped out under me and I fell snapping my board in half”,
We sat down at the back the bus.
“Oh my god, Will your silly some times!”
“I’m so glad it is the last day”, he said.
“Yeah I know”,
 
Will was about 5’6 feet tall, with longish black hair and with crystal blue eyes with a hint of sea green. Will and I been best friends since we were really young.
 Just then Krystal got on the bus and walked up to Will.
“Hello baby”, she said.
“Hi”,
Okay, Krystal is one those girly-girly, the really popular ones. Who thinks she owns the whole world. She has this major crush on Will but he hates her. She always tries to hook up with him.
“So, what are you doing to night?” Krystal asked him.
“Well, nothing with you” he said to her.
“Oh come on, you are going to the thingy after school right?”
“Yes, I am”,
“And don’t you need a date”,
“Yeah, I guess so”, Will replied.
“So..?”
Will turned around and looked at me.
“Naomi?”
“Yes?” I said.
“Will you come with me tonight?” Will asked me.
“Like a date?”
“Yeah”,
I looked at Krystal she looked so upset and shocked. Just to upset her I am going to say yes. I put my arms around him.
“I thought you never ask!” I said with this big smile on my face.
“Sweet, I’ll pick you up at six”,
“Thanks” I said. -
I looked at Krystal. She started to cry and ran to the front of the bus. I felt bad then but some what not really bad.
“Did you just ask me to upset her?”
Will didn’t look at me.
“No. I mean yes!”
“What one?” I asked him
He looked at me. He was bright red.
“I… love you”
No one had ever said that to me. Thousands of emotions are running through my head. I didn’t know what to say.
“You don’t need to say anything you know that right?” he said to me
“I...its just”
Nothing would come out. NOTHING! My mouth just moved but nothing not a word nada, zero, nothing, zip came out.
“Hey, just let me pick you up tonight and we see how things go”
“Okay”
I sat there and looked out the window and saw our stop coming so I pressed the buzzer and we got off. We just walked we didn’t talk. We got to the school gates.
“I love you too” I said
I walked off. He was just standing there, looking at me walking off. Then his mates walked up to him and started to pat him on the back.
“Sup bro?” I heard someone say.
I walked to my class room were I saw Flory. She was talking to Starr.
“Hello peps” I said
They jumped.
“NAOMI!”
Flory came running at me. I just moved and she went flying. We started laughing.
“Hey! That’s not funny” said Flory
“You won’t guess what” I said
“What, what?” Starr asked
“I got a date! For to night”
“Oh my god! Who?” Starr yelled
“Will” I said
I sat down on the desk and looked at the window.
“Oh la la” said Flory
“Mmm” I said
“Well, now we all got dates” Starr said
“YEAH!!” Flory screamed
“Flory’s got Adam, Starr you got Alex and me and Will” I said
“Sounds sweet” Starr said
Then the bell rang and every one started to come in.
“Our secret?” I asked them
“Yeah” they said
We did our hand shake and sat down. The teacher walked in but it wasn’t our normal teacher.
“Hello class, I’m Mr Spurling”
He had this odd look, like he was up to some thing. He was about 50 years old and he had red hair and faded blue eyes. He was wearing such ugly clothing like old pants to his hips and an old daggy yellow top.
“Why have we got you?” Billy asked him
“I don't know much I just got called in” he said
I leant in to Starr.
“Well he is an odd one” I said.
“Yeah, I know” she said back.
“What a funny looking one too” Flory said
Just then Will and his mates walked in. Will is in a group of 4 there is Alex,Jamie and Adam.These guys are called “The School hotties”.
Alex- Tall about 5''7 feet, With sweet light sea green eyes and with his perfect hair, Short Black with tip of light brown hair. See what i mean?
Jamie- Tall again, well their all tall But Jamie taller he is about 5''8 feet now with his Perfect deep sea blue eyes and his light blonde hair (natural i might add) with no hint of brown just pure yellow.
Adam- Flory's favourite hottie. he is about 5''7 feet with short black hair and a soft light brown eyes with a hint of green and this huge White smile.
We where sitting at a desk of 6. Alex sat in front of Starr and Adam in front of Flory and well you can guess what, next will sat in front of me. Jamie being the odd one grabbed a chair and just sat next to Alex.
“You young man” The teacher said pointing at Jamie.
“Yeah?” he said.
“You are late, Jamie”'
“OH Mr. S long time, no see” he said
“Yes Jamie, it has been a long time you still own me home work” he said smiling
“Shit”
We all laughed.
“Shut up” he said.
The day went pretty slow after that. I just wanted it to hurry up so we could go on our date.
 
Lunch time-
Starr, Flory and I went out side.
“The fresh air” Starr said
“Isn't it great?” asked Flory.
“You know what will be better?” I asked them.
“What?” Starr asked?
“Tonight” I said.
“I know, how great it will be” Flory said
Just then Will and co just walked up to us.
“Hey” they said.
“How weird is that new teacher” said Adam.
“He seems like he is up to some thing” Starr said.
“Mr.s? ha ha no way!” Jamie said.
We left it at that.
 
After School
I was waiting at the school gate for Flory and Starr. They are taking for ever. About 10 mins later I got fed up and just walked off. I started to walk off when I saw Mr.Spurling packing something in to his car. I couldn’t quite make out what it was. I thought be best to just leave it so I walked off. I caught the bus home it was very quite no one was really on it. When I got off it wasn’t much a walk home. I grab my keys and open the door.
“Hello honey” my mum said
She was in the kitchen cooking.
“Hi” I yelled back at her
“How was your day?”
“Not to bad, I got a date for tonight” I said as I started to climb the stairs. 
“OH really and who would this boy be?”
“Will mother” I said I was up the top the stairs.
“Really? How cute. You better get ready or you’ll be late”
“I am,”
I Went to my room and hopped into the shower. It was just then I remembered that I probably should have got a towel. I finished having a shower. The good thing is that I have a shower in my room. It being my room I just thought there be no one in my room but when I opened the door to my shock there sitting on my bed happened to Will and he happened to look at me and out of all things I was naked.
“Ahhh I’ll just get going then. I’ll be waiting down stairs” he said and walked out.
I was kind of feeling really weird. I don’t what to say maybe I should get dress I thought. I walked over to my cupboard and pulled out a dress I had. It was a boob tube like top and very wavy button and it was a light chocolate brown colour with a big belt. I also put on my brown high hells. I straightened my hair.
I still can’t believe that he walked in on me. I felt weird it the first time some one have ever walked in on me like that. I went down and when I was walking down they both looked at me. Will looked really good. He was really nicely dressed that I nearly feel down the stairs he looked that good.
“Hey, I’m really sorry about before, really sorry” he said to me
“Ha, ha it’s okay” I said.
“You look really nice”
“I could say the same thing about you”
“Awww you guys are so cute, I want to take a picture” my mum said.
“MUM!” I said.
“Hey, it’s all good” Will said
My mum took the picture.
“Okay, we’re going now” I said
“Okay, I see you soon, love you” She said
I went up to her kissed her and grabbed Will’s hand and walked out the door.
“Thank god, that’s over” I Said
“Ha, ha it wasn’t that bad” He said
“Mmmm” I said
“Shall we get going?” he asked
“Sure, why not” I said
We started to walk, he started to hold my hand and I just smiled. We are going to “Bang Bang”. We do this every year. It’s like a mini club but with out beer and stuff. We finally got there. There where a lot people waiting out there in line and the body guarded at the front (his name is Tom) was just standing there not letting any one in.
“Tom, baby how are you” I said
“Ah Naomi, come right in” he said with big smile on his face.
“Why thank you tom”
“Is he with you?” he looked at Will
“Yep he is” I said
“Lucky him, have a nice time, by the way you look hot” he said
“Thanks, Tommo” I said
We walked in. We saw Flory and co, we walked up to them and we all started to dance. The band was our own it was the “Hilltop Hoods” then next it was “Bang Bang” that’s why the club is called “Bang Bang”.
When the stoped playing “The hard Road”. We all went up to get drinks.
“Well, are you having fun?” I asked Starr and Flory.
“Great, this is so much fun” Flory said.
“Yeah I know what you mean” Starr yelled.
“Great” I said
Flory looked at Starr.
“Come to the toilet with me please?” she asked her
“Sure!” she said and they walked off.
I stood there and just waited for the boys to get back.
Flory and Starr went in to the toilet, the herd Krystal voice and run in to a toilet cube and started to listen what she was saying.
“Hey that Naomi girl is going to pay for what she did ha, ha!!!” she said to some one.
“What would you like me to do?” said a mans voice
They did hear the rest of the conversation because they left.
 “”OH MY GOD!!” Starr yelled.
“I know, what could they do?” Flory asked
“We should tell her”
“I know, let’s go find her” They left and went out trying to find her.
 
“Hey sexy” Will said as he walked up to me
“Hey” I said
“Let’s dance”
“Sure, I loved to” I said
He took me out to the dance floor. The Hills were off and now “Bang Bang” was on.
There were lots off people on and we just danced.
“Naomi!” Flory yelled
“Where is she?” Starr said
“Naomi!”
Will put his arms around me, then he smiled and winked. I wasn’t sure if he winked at me or some one behind me and then I turned around.
“BANG, BANG!” They sang.
I hit the floor, just then Krystal walked up to Will and hugged him.
“Pity, she was kind of cute” she said
I felt sick really bad, the pain. Just then Flory and Starr ran up to me. Flory got her phone out and called someone. Then the last thing I remember is Krystal pashing Will right front of me then every thing went black.
 
The end
By Keshia Kimber.
“BANG, BANG”
 
1 day ago…
“Hey!” Will yelled at me as he hugged me.
“Hi”, I said.
“So, how are you?” he asked me.
“I’m ok, what about you? I didn’t think you’d be this happy”
“Well, it’s ok, but it still hurts”,
“Well, it taught you a lesson”,
“Shut up! I know!” he said.
“So what happened anyway?” I asked him.
“Look the bus is coming!” he said.
We climbed on to the bus and put are tickets in.
“Okay, I was skating and trying to grind this pole but the skateboard slipped out under me and I fell snapping my board in half”,
We sat down at the back the bus.
“Oh my god, Will your silly some times!”
“I’m so glad it is the last day”, he said.
“Yeah I know”,
 
Will was about 5’6 feet tall, with longish black hair and with crystal blue eyes with a hint of sea green. Will and I been best friends since we were really young.
 Just then Krystal got on the bus and walked up to Will.
“Hello baby”, she said.
“Hi”,
Okay, Krystal is one those girly-girly, the really popular ones. Who thinks she owns the whole world. She has this major crush on Will but he hates her. She always tries to hook up with him.
“So, what are you doing to night?” Krystal asked him.
“Well, nothing with you” he said to her.
“Oh come on, you are going to the thingy after school right?”
“Yes, I am”,
“And don’t you need a date”,
“Yeah, I guess so”, Will replied.
“So..?”
Will turned around and looked at me.
“Naomi?”
“Yes?” I said.
“Will you come with me tonight?” Will asked me.
“Like a date?”
“Yeah”,
I looked at Krystal she looked so upset and shocked. Just to upset her I am going to say yes. I put my arms around him.
“I thought you never ask!” I said with this big smile on my face.
“Sweet, I’ll pick you up at six”,
“Thanks” I said. -
I looked at Krystal. She started to cry and ran to the front of the bus. I felt bad then but some what not really bad.
“Did you just ask me to upset her?”
Will didn’t look at me.
“No. I mean yes!”
“What one?” I asked him
He looked at me. He was bright red.
“I… love you”
No one had ever said that to me. Thousands of emotions are running through my head. I didn’t know what to say.
“You don’t need to say anything you know that right?” he said to me
“I...its just”
Nothing would come out. NOTHING! My mouth just moved but nothing not a word nada, zero, nothing, zip came out.
“Hey, just let me pick you up tonight and we see how things go”
“Okay”
I sat there and looked out the window and saw our stop coming so I pressed the buzzer and we got off. We just walked we didn’t talk. We got to the school gates.
“I love you too” I said
I walked off. He was just standing there, looking at me walking off. Then his mates walked up to him and started to pat him on the back.
“Sup bro?” I heard someone say.
I walked to my class room were I saw Flory. She was talking to Starr.
“Hello peps” I said
They jumped.
“NAOMI!”
Flory came running at me. I just moved and she went flying. We started laughing.
“Hey! That’s not funny” said Flory
“You won’t guess what” I said
“What, what?” Starr asked
“I got a date! For to night”
“Oh my god! Who?” Starr yelled
“Will” I said
I sat down on the desk and looked at the window.
“Oh la la” said Flory
“Mmm” I said
“Well, now we all got dates” Starr said
“YEAH!!” Flory screamed
“Flory’s got Adam, Starr you got Alex and me and Will” I said
“Sounds sweet” Starr said
Then the bell rang and every one started to come in.
“Our secret?” I asked them


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