*YOU*

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

When a loved one lets you down...

You let me down

You were never there

You made me cry

you never cared...

you shattered all my dreams,

and all my hopes

You left me with nothing,

unable to cope...

I trusted you with my life,

all you gave me

was trouble and strife..

Why didn't you just go?

Why didn't you just leave?

Why all the pain?

Why all the grief?

You broke me down,

you left me wounded...

You are to blame,

You are the winner of

this cruel game,

Because of you,

now, I'll never be the same.


Submitted: February 14, 2009

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Alovi Luna

oooooh, nice i like i. :))

Sat, February 14th, 2009 3:46am

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THANK YOU! JUST POSTED TWO OTHERS- INSIDE OF ME AND MY HEARTS PASSION. CHECK THEM OUT IF YOU CAN! :)

Fri, February 13th, 2009 8:10pm

guff01

You can feel the hatred as the emotions flow and the words rear their ugly head. This hits you in the mouth and is alarmingly filled with anger.

Sat, February 14th, 2009 4:24am

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yes. Sadly this was inspired by someone in my past who hurt me very much, Guess deep inside there's still a scar.

Fri, February 13th, 2009 10:06pm

Manyfacets

Another great one!
Although painful it tells it like it is.
Sometimes scars can be a blessing in
desguise..Just look at the greatness of
this poem...see my meaning here?
Thanks for posting this great read.
kind regards M.

Fri, February 20th, 2009 3:45pm

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Thank you! And yes I truly see your meaning..
;)

Fri, February 20th, 2009 8:14am

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