This is a poem about how I feel about one of my exes

How did we end up here

Why did this happen

Once we loved

Now we hate

When we felt

We lied hand in hand

Two hearts one

But now broken

I really miss you

I think about the thinks we shared

We were one

So now I turn back the pages from our past

And I ask myself

What went wrong

Why did something happen to something that seemed so pure

How did we go from being so happy

To something so tragic

First,We Loved

Second,We Hate

Now, I love

This is something thatI can never let go



We parted ways

But I keep seeing your face


Submitted: May 29, 2012

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Interesting, thoughtful, ponderous, imaginative, metaphysical, well written and presented. Enjoyed reading it.

Yes! The duality, contradictions and/or absurdity of life. At times, sequential. At other times, simultaneous or concurrent. Not easily understood.

Gave it an "I Like It" vote. As with your other posting. Both well deserved.

If you apply to become a fan, I'll gladly add you.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Thu, May 31st, 2012 1:25am


Thank you.

Thu, May 31st, 2012 10:02am

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